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劉基《賣柑者言》 — the matched-shape inventory, frozen before the rendering

Enumerated under R40 §1, whose criteria were fixed in the regime file before this enumeration began. Sentence numbers are ../copy-text-adopted.txt's.

The strength of this freeze, stated exactly. The regime's criteria were written first; this inventory was committed to the repository before the rendering file existed. It is nevertheless a weaker freeze than R39's: in the course of testing whether §1's criteria were applicable to this text at all, the hand tried English at several loci. R39's inventory for the Arabic chapter was frozen with no English attempted anywhere. That difference is declared here rather than claimed away, and it is a limit on any claim this rendering supports about resource choice.

0. Two thresholds, declared here before the enumeration

  1. A member must be at least two characters. Single-character members inside a lexicalised binome — 寒/暑, 口/鼻, 籩/豆, 賓/客, 孫/吳, 伊/皋 — are below the threshold and are not loci in themselves. They remain available as matched positions inside a larger locus. Without this threshold every antonymic compound in Classical Chinese is a matched-shape figure and the class stops meaning anything, exactly as R38 declined «بعض … بعض» as a property of the construction rather than a choice made at that place.
  2. A maximal uninterrupted series is one locus. Where three or four members stand in series and all of them satisfy (i)–(iii) together, the series is enumerated once, with its member count recorded — not as two or three overlapping two-member loci. A larger span whose only matched structure is the concatenation of admitted loci is not separately admitted.

1. The inventory — 12 loci

SHAPE-a = 對偶 proper, no character shared between members · SHAPE-b = 排比, a frame recurs.

id sent the Chinese members sub-class
M1 2 玉質 · 金色 2 SHAPE-a
M2 6 實籩豆 · 奉祭祀 · 供賓客 3 SHAPE-a
M3 13 佩虎符 · 坐皋比 2 SHAPE-a
M4 14 峨大冠 · 托長紳 2 SHAPE-a
M5 16 坐高堂 · 騎大馬 · 醉醇醴 · 飫肥鮮 4 SHAPE-a
M6 21 憤世 · 疾邪 2 SHAPE-a
M7 10 吾售之 · 人取之 2 SHAPE-b (之)
M8 13–14 洸洸乎干城之具也 · 昂昂乎廟堂之器也 2 SHAPE-b (乎…之…也)
M9 13–14 果能授孫、吳之略耶 · 果能建伊、皋之業耶 2 SHAPE-b (果能…之…耶)
M10 15 盜起而不知御 · 民困而不知救 · 吏奸而不知禁 · 法斁而不知理 4 SHAPE-b (而不知)
M11 16 巍巍乎可畏 · 赫赫乎可象 2 SHAPE-b (乎可)
M12 17 金玉其外 · 敗絮其中 2 SHAPE-b (其)

1.1 The counts this inventory exists to produce

count per 100 source characters
loci admitted 12 3.85
of which SHAPE-a (對偶 proper) 6 1.92
of which SHAPE-b (排比, framed) 6 1.92
members carried by the twelve loci 30

These rates are not comparable with the Arabic chapter's. T-kalila-fanza-R39-v1 counts loci per 100 words; this counts per 100 characters, the classical Chinese character being roughly a word, and the two censuses use different source-side criteria because the two languages match by different means. The number that is comparable across the two is the English one — which resource (A)–(D) the hand used — because R40 imports R39's resource table verbatim.

2. The loci the rule declined, and why — R40 rule 1

sent the Chinese why declined
1 善藏柑 / 涉寒暑不潰 members of 3 and 5 characters — (i) fails
1, 4, 6 寒/暑 · 口/鼻 · 籩/豆 · 賓/客 single-character members inside lexicalised binomes — below §0's threshold
3 置於市 / 賈十倍 / 人爭鬻之 3, 3 and 4 characters, and 置於市 is verb + preposition + noun against 賈十倍's noun + numeral + noun — (i) and (ii) both fail
7 衒外 / 惑愚瞽 2 against 3 — (i) fails
9 吾業是有年矣 / 吾賴是以食吾軀 6 against 7; the frame 吾…是… does recur, and the members it frames do not match — (i) fails
13–14 孫、吳 / 伊、皋 single-character members — below threshold; the matched position is carried inside M9
15 坐糜廩粟而不知恥 8 characters against M10's four members of 6 — (i) fails. The source breaks its own series here, and the break is the point of the sentence; the rendering must not repair it
18 今子是之不察 / 而以察吾柑 察 recurs, and the constructions differ — (ii) fails. This is repetition, not matched shape
20 東方生滑稽之流 no second member

One decline is worth naming twice. Sentence 15 sets four six-character members marching and then puts an eight-character member at the end — 坐糜廩粟而不知恥, they sit consuming the granary's grain and know no shame. Under R40 rule 4 the rendering may put no matched-shape figure outside the inventory, so the English must break its measure at exactly that clause. A hand who tidied the fifth member into the pattern would be improving the Chinese.