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Copy-text and collation — «باب اللبؤة والإسوار والشغبر»

1. The witnesses

witness provenance state
copy-text Arabic Wikisource, كليلة ودمنة/باب اللبوة والإسوار والشغبر no edition statement; unvocalised; modern orthography 599 words of body in 37 sentences; clean typography, four outright corruptions (§3.1)
witness 2 Arabic Wikisource, كليلة ودمنة (الأميرية، 1937)/باب اللبؤة والإسوار والشغبر Cairo: al-Maṭbaʿa al-Amīriyya (Būlāq) 1937, index كليلة ودمنة.pdf, pp. 296–300, page images present vocalised; optical recognition damaged, and worse here than in the three earlier chapters

Same pair of witnesses as ../kalila-saih/collation.md, ../kalila-nasik/collation.md and ../kalila-ibn-urs/collation.md. As with kalila-ibn-urs, the witness-2 chapter page is a bare transclusion ({{صفحات|فهرس=كليلة ودمنة.pdf|من=296|إلى=300}}) and returns an empty extract; the text was taken from the five صفحة: pages and cut at the chapter headings.

The witness-2 transcription for this chapter is pagequality level="1" — not proofread — and that is a real limit on this collation, stated here rather than discovered later. The recognition damage is dense and systematic: غ→ع (الشغبر → الشعبر throughout), ل↔ه (اللبؤة → البوة / الهبوة / القبوة), ث→ن or س (الثمار → النمار / السمار), ض→ح (تضجّي → تضحى), ظ→ر (ينظر → يُرْ), plus stray marginal footnote digits. A reading is adopted from witness 2 only where the underlying Arabic is unambiguous through the damage. Where the damage could be hiding a genuine variant, that is recorded in §3.3 and nothing is adopted.

2. Sentence numbering

The copy-text carries no numbering. Sentences are cut at ., ؟ and !, as in the three earlier chapters. The split yields 37 sentences, numbered [1]–[37] in copy-text-adopted.txt, and every citation on the translation page and in the two figure inventories uses these numbers.

One boundary is a corruption and is not repaired by renumbering. The copy-text prints a full stop after «وكان عيشه من الثمار» at the end of [31], orphaning a فلما clause with no apodosis; [31] and [32] are one syntactic period («فلما رأى ذلك ورشان … قال لها: …»). Witness 2 has a stray ) at the same place, so the damage is in both. The numbering is kept as split — renumbering would break citation against the raw copy-text — and [31]+[32] are rendered as one period.

3. The collation

Read whole, both witnesses, in Arabic.

3.1 Substantive adoptions — five, all from witness 2

# sent copy-text witness 2 adopted why
1 [7] ولهـما شبلان وَلَهَـا سبُلَانِ ولها شبلان The subject is the lioness alone; a dual pronoun has no referent. Copy-text error.
2 [7] خرجت قي طلب الصيد فِي طَلَبِ الصَّيْدِ في Plain typographic ruin (ق for ف).
3 [14] قال لها شغبر قَالَ لَهَا الشَّعْبَرُ الشغبر The jackal is introduced indefinitely at [9] and is definite at every other mention ([20], [22], [24], [26], [28], [30]). Witness 2's ع is the recognition damage for غ and is not a variant.
4 [30] إلى الثمار والمسك والعبادة إِلَى الثَّمَارِ وَالنَّسُكِ وَالْعِبَادَةِ النسك Musk for asceticism: a dotting error in the copy-text. The chapter's own closing sentence [36] has «وأقبلت على النّسك والعبادة», so the copy-text contradicts itself.
5 [32] أن الشجرة عامنا هذا لم تحمل أَنَّ الشَّجَرَ … لَمْ تَحْمِلُ الشجر The same sentence continues «علمت أن الشجر العام أثمرت»; the collective is the ring-dove's subject throughout, and [33] has «فويل للشجر».

3.2 Orthography

The witness-2 chapter heading spells اللبؤة with hamza; the copy-text page title spells it اللبوة while its own body has لبؤة at [7] and اللبؤة at [13], [19], [21], [23], [25], [30], [35], [36]. اللبؤة is used throughout this project's pages, including in the work title. Witness 2 glosses it in the margin: «الأسدة وهى مهموزة وغير مهموزة» — the lioness, spelt with or without hamza — so the variation is the tradition's, not an error in either witness. Vocalisation is witness 2's alone and is not carried into the adopted text.

3.3 Recorded and not adopted — six places

Each is a difference where witness 2's reading is either equally good or too damaged to trust.

sent copy-text witness 2 disposition
[3] ما يضر الناس مَا يَضُرُ بِالنَّاسِ Both idiomatic; copy-text kept.
[4] فإن من لم يفكر في العواقب فَإِنَّ مَنْ لَمْ يُرْ فِي الْعَوَاقِبِ The damage is probably hiding «ينظر». If so it is a real variant and it matters: [29] has «لسوء نظرك في العواقب», so witness 2's reading would make the chapter's key phrase recur in the same words. Unresolvable at level="1"; copy-text kept, and this page records that the figure inventories below may be under-counting one repetition.
[5] واعتبر بما يصيبه وَاعْتَبَر مَا يُصِيبُهُ Both grammatical; copy-text kept.
[5] من ضرر لغيره مِنْ ضَرَرِهِ لِغَيْرِهِ Witness 2 slightly clearer; not clear enough to adopt against a sound copy-text.
[14] ممن كان يجد بحميمه مَنْ كَانَ يَجِدُ Copy-text kept: ممن governs the preceding غير واحد.
[26] أرأيت الوحش التي كنت تأكلين أَرَأَيْتِ الْوُحُوشَ الَّتِي Copy-text kept: the collective الوحش is used at [23] and [25] too, and التي agrees with it.

3.4 What witness 2 supplies that the copy-text does not

Four marginal glosses, printed in the 1937 edition and absent from the copy-text. Two of them settled a rendering decision (see the translation's log, D2 and D6):

4. Result

copy-text-adopted.txt is the copy-text with the five adoptions of §3.1 and nothing else. 599 words of body in 37 sentences; the adoptions change no word count. It, and not the raw copy-text, is what was translated.