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| id | S-hafez-sahar-bolbol |
| status | frozen |
| created | 2026-08-31 |
| updated | 2026-08-31 |
| links | workshop/translations/hafez-sahar-bolbol/R55-v1/translation.md, wiki/arms/ARM-radif-hands.md |
Copy-text — «حافظ» غزل ۱۳۰, «سحر بلبل حکایت با صبا کرد»
Witness: Ganjoor, Qazvini–Ghani text of the Divan of Hafez,
https://api.ganjoor.net/api/ganjoor/poem?url=/hafez/ghazal/sh130, fetched 2026-08-31; the raw
response is at runs/RS-20260831b-radif-hands/raw/ganjoor_sh130.json. Public domain (Hafez, d. c.
1390).
No second witness was collated. Ganjoor exposes one text and no free second Persian witness of
the Divan was reachable; this is a stated limit, not a collation. The same limit was stated for
S-hafez-ghazals-radif on 2026-08-29 and nothing has changed it.
The numbering is Ganjoor's hemistich order: odd = first hemistich, even = second. Rhyming
positions are hemistich 1 and every even hemistich — eleven of them. Radif کرد; qāfiya in
-ا.
غزل شمارهٔ ۱۳۰ — 10 bayts
- سحر بلبل حکایت با صبا کرد
- که عشقِ رویِ گل با ما چهها کرد
- از آن رنگِ رُخَم، خون در دل افتاد
- وز آن گلشن، به خارم مبتلا کرد
- غلامِ همتِ آن نازنینم
- که کار خیر بی روی و ریا کرد
- من از بیگانگان دیگر ننالم
- که با من هرچه کرد آن آشنا کرد
- گر از سلطان طمع کردم، خطا بود
- ور از دلبر وفا جُستَم، جفا کرد
- خوشش باد آن نسیمِ صبحگاهی
- که دردِ شب نشینان را دوا کرد
- نقابِ گل کَشید و زلفِ سُنبل
- گره بندِ قبای غنچه وا کرد
- به هر سو بلبلِ عاشق در افغان
- تَنَعُّم از میان، بادِ صبا کرد
- بشارت بَر به کویِ می فروشان
- که حافظ توبه از زهدِ ریا کرد
- وفا از خواجگانِ شهر با من
- کمالِ دولت و دین بوالوفا کرد
The eleven rhyming positions and the qāfiya's relation to the radif verb
Read off the Persian before any English was written, and frozen here because the whole point of
the unit is that this is knowable from the source alone. کرد is the third-person past of کردن,
which is both the ordinary verb to do and the light verb of hundreds of Persian compounds.
| # | hemistich | qāfiya | its relation to کرد |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | v1 | صبا |
object of the preposition با — not an argument of کرد |
| 2 | v2 | چهها |
direct object of کرد |
| 3 | v4 | مبتلا |
predicative complement in the compound مبتلا کردن, to afflict |
| 4 | v6 | ریا |
object of the preposition بی — not an argument of کرد |
| 5 | v8 | آشنا |
subject of کرد |
| 6 | v10 | جفا |
nominal of the light-verb compound جفا کردن, to be unfaithful |
| 7 | v12 | دوا |
nominal of the light-verb compound دوا کردن, to cure |
| 8 | v14 | وا |
preverb of وا کردن, to open |
| 9 | v16 | صبا |
subject (in باد صبا) |
| 10 | v18 | ریا |
attributive inside زهد ریا, itself object of از — not an argument |
| 11 | v20 | بوالوفا |
subject (the last element of a patron's title) |
Four of the eleven qāfiyas are the object or complement of the radif verb (positions 2, 3, 6, 7);
one is a preverb inside it (position 8); three are its subject (5, 9, 11); three stand in an oblique
relation to something else (1, 4, 10). The Persian also reuses two rhyme words — صبا at
positions 1 and 9, ریا at positions 4 and 10 — which the form permits.