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R50 — the balanced period: Preston's own printed remedy, instantiated

v0.1, pilot. Executed twice: «المقامة الصنعانية» (S222) and «المقامة الحلوانية» (S223), the second on material the regime was not designed against.

R48 made the object Chappelow 1767 and Preston 1850 refused to make. But Preston did not only refuse. In the same paragraph he printed what he would do instead, and that positive half of his sentence has never been instantiated either:

The Makamat consisting of a stately rhyming prose, interspersed with metrical passages, the translator has rendered the latter into English verse, and the former into a species of composition which occupies a middle place between prose and verse, the clauses of which, though not rhyming together, are arranged as far as possible in evenly balanced periods, and never exceed a certain length. Rhyming prose is extremely ungraceful in English, and introduces an air of flippancy, unless the subject be of the most light and frivolous description.

R50 is that sentence read as a rule. It is a third policy, not a control: R43 is restraint (take the ordinary word; keep the chime only when it comes free), R48 is the rhyme first, and R50 gives up the sound and spends the effort on balance instead.

The rule

1. Prose stays prose; verse stays verse — R43 rule 1, carried over unchanged.
2. Render the sense. This clause outranks 3–6. No fact, event, referent or evaluation added; nothing dropped. Verbatim from R43 rule 2 and R48 rule 2, and for the same reason: it is what keeps the three arms comparable.
3. The clauses do not rhyme together. At every frozen prose saj' locus the colon-end pair is graded by tools/rhyme_pairs.py and must come back NONE. A chime that falls out for free is refused, and the refusal is logged with the word that was given up. STRICT and IDENTICAL are failures of the regime; NEAR is a failure wherever the hand can hear it and is logged either way.
4. The two members of a saj' pair are brought as near to each other as the sense allows, in syllable count and in grammatical shape. Balance is graded mechanically — the absolute difference in syllables between the two cola, by CMUdict — and reported for the whole rendering beside the same figure for the other arms. "As far as possible" is Preston's own hedge and is kept: where the Arabic is itself lopsided, or where a speech tag or a proper name inflates one member, the pair is logged as a declared exception rather than balanced by padding, which rule 2 forbids.
5. No prose colon exceeds fourteen words. Preston's "never exceed a certain length" does not say what the length is; fourteen is declared here, before the rendering, as roughly twice the median colon of the source. Every overrun is logged with its reason.

2026-08-26, and the rule is unchanged: fourteen turns out to be Preston's own maximum. RS-20260826-balanced-period measured his printed page for the first time — 230 lines across two Assemblies, longest 14 words and 13 words, not one exceeding fourteen. The number declared here from the Arabic's median colon, by a hand that had never opened his translation, is the number he keeps. Recorded as a coincidence, not as a warrant: the rule's justification remains the one written above. 6. The verse is rendered into rhymed English verse, which is the other half of Preston's printed policy. Run depth is not attempted beyond the couplet (R42 rule 4). 7. Freeze before evaluation. The log is frozen and committed before any evaluation of the rendering is designed.

What R50 does not carry, and why

Preston also lineated — his prose is set out one Arabic colon to a line, "a middle place between prose and verse" typographically as well as rhythmically (A-hariri-hands §2). R50 does not carry the lineation, and the reason is a design constraint rather than a reading of his sentence: an arm that is laid out differently from the arms it is compared with is identifiable on sight, and no blind comparison of the three policies would survive it. The regime therefore instantiates the language of Preston's remedy and not its page. This is a declared deviation, not an oversight.

What R50 is not

Like R48, it is not a recommendation. It is the third arm of an experiment, and it exists because a translator who accepts Preston's refusal still has to put something in the place where the sound was. R50 is one answer — his own — made concrete enough to be judged.