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R12 — Arnold 1861 (the four axioms, executed)

v1.0 (frozen 2026-08-02, S093.) The first regime in this project assembled from a documented historical translator's published programme rather than from a modern theorist or from the project's own abstract poles. Every rule below is Matthew Arnold's, from On Translating Homer (1861) and Last Words on Translating Homer (1862), read complete in the original this session (S-arnold-newman-homer); section references are to the Routledge one-volume edition, Project Gutenberg #65381.

Its pair is R13, assembled the same way from Francis W. Newman, the translator Arnold was attacking, who replied in print. The two regimes exist so that the project can ask a question neither man asked: at how many of a real passage's decision sites do the two programmes actually decide differently?

R12 is not R07. R07 is a fluency regime derived from the criticism of fluency; R12 is the fluency position stated by one of its architects, and it is source-conditioned in a way R07 is not — its tribunal is a reader who has the Greek (A9). That difference is the regime's whole reason for existing.

Roles, human involvement

As R07. Lead translator, labeled subject, $0. Judge never the lead.

The rule set (frozen; cited by number in the log)

A1 — Rapidity. The movement must not check the reader. Inversion, suspension and pregnant compression are forbidden where they retard: "Instead of moving on without check, as in reading the original, the reader twice finds himself, in reading the translation, brought up and checked." Rhyme is excluded, because "rhyme inevitably tends to pair lines which in the original are independent."

A2 — Plainness of style and diction. Plain and direct in syntax and in words; nothing artificial, rhetorical or literary. Antithesis may not be substituted for Homer's method of marking separation by moving away.

A3 — Plainness of ideas. No fancy interposed between the object and its expression. "Free from fancifulness." Nothing added that the source does not think.

A4 — Nobleness. Never over-familiar, never low. The translator "should be as idiomatic as he can be without ceasing to be noble." Test case supplied by Arnold himself: Chapman's "Poor wretched beasts" for ἆ δειλώ is "pitched many degrees too low", while Shakespeare's "Poor venomous fool, Be angry and despatch!" is in the grand style.

A5 — The established-possession test. This is the operative rule, and it is what makes R12 testable. A feature that is odd in derivation is admissible only if it is an established possession of the reader's mind for the purpose it is employed in. "The question is not, whether a diction is antiquated for current speech, but whether it is antiquated for that particular purpose for which it is employed." Hence arméd, spake, perchance are admissible in English verse and bragly, bulkin, withouten are not — not because the second set is stranger in origin but because it is not possessed. Corollary, in Arnold's words: Homer's double epithets "must be, in many places, renounced altogether; in all places where they are rendered, rendered by equivalents which come naturally."

A6 — Verbal fidelity yields to natural effect. "To the preservation of this in his own version the translator must without scruple sacrifice, where it is necessary, verbal fidelity to his original, rather than run any risk of producing, by literalness, an odd and unnatural effect."

A7 — Be plainer than the source. "The English translator must be even plainer, if possible, and more unambiguous than Homer himself; the connection of meaning must be even more distinctly marked in the translation than in the original." This licenses supplying a connective the Greek leaves implicit — Arnold's own "in spite of the future" at Il. VI.446.

A8 — The Bible is a mine of diction, used as assistance and not as authority. "The Bible vocabulary is to be used as an assistance, not as an authority." Arnold's own worked example: brazen-coated is admissible for χαλκοχιτώνων because "a coat of brass" is Biblical and specified in connection with its wearer; pre-eminent is admissible because "the right hand of the Lord hath the pre-eminence".

A9 — The tribunal. The judge is one who both knows Greek and can appreciate poetry. Not the ancient audience ("the Greeks are dead"), not the ordinary English reader ("has not the data for judging"), not the translator ("no man can safely confide in his own single judgment of his own work"), and not the pedantic scholar who looks to detail rather than general effect.

A10 — Metre. The English accentual hexameter, six beats, spondees used freely against the dactylic default, and every line must read itself: no line may require the reader to move an accent off its natural place in order to scan.

Procedure

Identical to R07 §§1–8 with R07 substituted by R12, plus:

• §5b — A5 sites are flagged. Where a rendering was chosen or rejected because a feature was, or was not, an established possession, the log marks it A5 and names the feature. A5 is the rule the whole 1861–62 controversy turns on and the project's naturalness sense has no operational form of it; counting where it fires is the point of running the regime.
• §5c — Sites where the rule set is silent are marked SILENT rather than assigned to the nearest rule.

Outputs

As R07: the rendering, a numbered decision log with a rule code on every entry, and the flags above.

Known limitations (by design)

• Everything R07 lists, including that the translator scores its own coverage and that the rule set is this project's assembly, not Arnold's own numbered list — Arnold wrote lectures, not rules.
• A5 cannot be applied without a judgment about the reader, and the reader Arnold means is a Victorian scholar. The project applies it as "an established possession of an educated present-day English reader of verse", which is a substitution and is not Arnold's.
• A9 is not available to this project's jury, which is not given the source. A translation made under R12 therefore cannot be evaluated by the instrument R12 itself prescribes. This is not a defect of the regime; it is the finding RS-20260802g reports.
• A4 can veto but cannot generate, exactly as R08's R9 can.
• A10 will be executed imperfectly. The lead is not a practised writer of English hexameters, and metrical failure under A10 must not be read as failure of A1–A9.

Changelog

• 2026-08-02 v1.0 (frozen, S093) — created, with R13, for E-20260802g-programme-divergence.