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Source manifest — 草枕 第七章(湯壺の場) / Kusamakura, chapter VII, the bath

This is a stored source span, NOT a ratified canon member. D-20260723-02's criterion 3 (whole-work translatability, ≤ ~10,000 characters) is not met by Kusamakura, which runs to 83,979 non-whitespace characters. What is stored here is a defined span of it, committed so that a translation of it is reproducible. No canon-selection decision covers it and none is claimed; it was chosen by this session under ARM-framework for the reasons in §Selection.

Bibliographic

Source (Aozora Bunko)

The span, defined by index

Lines 976–998 (0-indexed) of the cleaned full text, being the first twelve non-empty paragraphs of chapter 七 after the two-line opening 「寒い。手拭を下げて、湯壺へ下る。」 — from 「三畳へ着物を脱いで…」 through 「…太棹かとも思う。」

Public-domain verification

Selection — why this span

Chosen under ARM-framework for the second regime comparison, against three constraints:

  1. Source and a published English translation both freely reachable (charter §7, A8, and CLAUDE.md's materials instruction). Source: Aozora, above. English: Kazutomo Takahashi (1862–1931), Unhuman Tour, The Japan Times, 1927 — Project Gutenberg #73131, public domain. This is the pairing the standing instruction prefers and it is rare for Japanese prose: Gutenberg holds exactly two Sōseki works in English.
  2. Comparability with the project's only prior regime comparison. E-20260724-r01r02-selfrevise ran on 蜘蛛の糸 and 夢十夜 1–2 — Meiji/Taishō literary prose, JA→EN, one of them by this same author. Holding the pair and the period roughly fixed is what lets the lead-executable comparison sit beside the API one.
  3. Not the anthologised opening. 草枕's first paragraph is among the most quoted in modern Japanese literature. A mid-chapter span reduces — it does not remove — the chance that a lead rendering is remembered rather than made.

Contamination is measured, not asserted, on the translation artifacts, after they were frozen; see T-kusamakura-vii-bath-R06-v1 §Contamination and RS-20260727c-arm-identifiability. The measurement is against Takahashi 1927 only. Kusamakura's better-known Englishes — Alan Turney's The Three-Cornered World (1965) and Meredith McKinney's Kusamakura (2008) — are in copyright and not freely reachable here, so the measurement bounds contamination from one side only, exactly as the Verga measurement did against Dole rather than Lawrence (RS-20260727-longwork-selection §1).