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The word-order primaries are withheld a second time — a fresh three-seat run put one seat through both gates where two were required, and the seat that reads the verse best still cannot pass a floor built to catch a bad coder

ARM-line-end-order step 1 (T3), 2026-09-03. E-20260903b-line-end-order v2, after two independent pre-run critic seats returned NEEDS-REDESIGN with 28 findings, 8 BLOCKING on one point (critic-response.md). Tier D is NOT PASSED. Nothing here is a judgment of quality and no sentence says a reader hears, prefers or wants anything.

The headline is a withholding, and it is the second one in a row on this question. RS-20260901-inversion-habit (S237) bought 523 line-end codes and withheld every word-order figure because one seat of three cleared its gates. This session was built to answer the charge that S237's gate had been loosened after it fired: it bought every voting code fresh, after both gates were committed, with the synthetic floor restored as binding and one defective calibration key corrected under a rule fixed in advance. The result is the same. One seat of three cleared both gates; the design required two; and analyse.py returns before any cell rate, contrast or interval is computed. The HABIT account of what separated Payne 1901 from Leaf 1898 — is the line-end inversion a standing property of a hand's line, or bought where a device needs it — remains unmeasured, and this is now a finding about the construct's codeability, not a delay.

1. What was at stake, and why the design was rebuilt rather than re-analysed

framework/v0.2 §7.47.3 states in writing that the project does not know whether the inversion is a local purchase or a line-grammar. The backlog row that named the missing measurement proposed re-running S237's seats with the real-item key as the gate. Two critic seats called that NEEDS-REDESIGN with eight BLOCKING findings on one point (C1-A1, C1-A2, C1-A4, C1-A15; C2-A1, C2-A2, C2-A3, C2-A9): demoting the gate that fired while keeping the codes it fired on is gate-shopping, whatever it discloses. Granted in full. The operative design (design-v2.md) buys every voting code fresh, dispatches every seat after both gates are committed, restores the floor as binding, and adds a seat — qwen/qwen3.7-max — that had never coded this construct.

The subject rule, in one sentence (continue-prompt.md §4.5): this unit asks a translator of Persian verse whether the word-order move that carries a ghazal's commonest formal device can be bought for one line or must be adopted for the whole poem, and answers it by counting what two published translators and one working hand put at their line ends. The gate repair is a gate inside the unit, never its subject.

2. The wire between the limbs

T-hafez-shahed-R60-v1 rendered غزل ۱۵, «ای شاهد قدسی، کِه کَشَد بند نقابت» whole, in a declared plain modern register, under the new regime R60 — the no-radif counterpart of S237's sh77, whose radif forced a finite verb to stand last at nine positions. This poem obliges nothing at any line end. Its 20 line ends and the 16 of T-hafez-daasht-R58-v1 (sh77) went into the same blind coding batches as Payne's and Leaf's, indistinguishable from them. The rendering and its log were frozen and committed (dda56092) before any English of the poem was opened; contamination measured none (dependence-note.md, 0 shared 7-grams, longest run 3 tokens against Payne's volume, which contains this ghazal as ode 90).

3. The gates — one seat of three, and it is the reserve

The bought stage put 447 items to three non-Anthropic seats (387 study line ends + 24 corrected calibration + 36 lead line ends): one printed couplet with one line marked, no hand, no book, no poem, no rule. Two gates, both binding and both registered before any voting code existed: a floor of ≥ 21 of 24 synthetic pairs, and ≥ 0.75 agreement with 60 fresh real study items the lead coded blind — disjoint from S237's 40, double-coded (self-agreement 58/60 = 0.967), adjudicated and frozen before dispatch.

seat model floor, of 24 gold2 agreement votes
Q1 openai/gpt-5.6-terra 19 ✗ 0.700 [0.575, 0.801] ✗ no
Q2 google/gemini-3.6-flash 19 ✗ 0.840 [0.715, 0.917] ✓ no
Q3 qwen/qwen3.7-max 23 ✓ 0.850 [0.739, 0.919] ✓ yes

Failure criterion 2 fires: fewer than two voting seats, so no ORDER figure is reported at all. The withholding is enforced by the code, which returns before any primary — the verifier asserts it (26 checks, 0 failures; 5 of 5 mutations caught, every mutation targeting a figure this page reports on the withholding path).

The frontier seat that voted at S237 failed both gates here. Q1 (gpt-5.6-terra), which was the single voting seat at S237, agreed with the fresh gold at only 0.700 and cleared the floor at 19. Its S237 pass was on a 40-item gold it happened to match at 0.800; on 60 fresh items it does not. This is the strongest thing the session establishes: the seat the earlier design certified would not certify on independently drawn material, which is exactly the fragility the critics said a single-sample gate could hide.

4. Why this is now a finding about the construct, not a delay

Two withholdings on the same question, under two independently-built gates, one of them deliberately stricter than the first, is evidence that English line-end word order is not codeable reliably enough for two certified seats at this project's blind-coding reliability — not that the next design will succeed.

5. The one thing that IS measured, and it is the critics' enjambment finding

C1-A11, C1-A12 and C2-A8 said the three-step coding instruction mishandles enjambment: for a line whose clause runs past the printed couplet, "would the last word still be last in prose" is not a word-order fact about that hand. The design added a separate CLAUSE field and made the lead code it on the fresh gold. In the lead's own frozen gold, every one of the 21 items whose clause continues past the couplet is coded INVERTED — 21 of 21 — against 21 INVERTED of 39 among the complete-clause items. Enjambment and apparent inversion are almost perfectly confounded at the line end: a line that spills its clause forward will read as displaced whether or not the hand displaced anything.

This is why the enjambment stratification was made mandatory in the design, not optional (design-v2 §6): had the primaries reported, an inversion-rate difference between two hands who enjamb at different rates could have been an enjambment-rate difference wearing a word-order mask. The one voting seat's descriptive CONTINUES rates are Payne 0.160 and Leaf 0.148 — close, but the finding stands as a method result: any future coding of English line-end word order must separate enjambment from inversion before it counts, because the two are confounded at the line end by construction. It goes to framework/v0.2 as a caution and to method note (bsx).

6. The translation limb, exploratory (design-v2 §8) — counts, no rates

By the lead's own frozen R60 grading of غزل ۱۵ (tally_log.py over the frozen log):

sh15 (no radif): 20 line ends, 19 CANONICAL, 1 INVERTED. The one inversion is a place where the Persian itself fronts the object (every moan and cry that I made → verb last). At the 11 rhyming positions, which oblige nothing, the English inverts 0 times.

sh77 (radif had, from S237's frozen log): 9 rhyming positions carried by inversion, 6 LOCAL, 3 SPREAD.

Set beside each other these are the translation limb's version of the withheld study question: the same hand, in the same declared register, inverts its line end where a radif obliges it and almost nowhere else. That is one hand's existence result — 16 and 20 line ends, no rate — and it is consistent with the LOCAL-purchase reading RS-20260901-inversion-habit §7.47.2 drew from sh77 alone. It is not evidence about the published hands, and the hand knew the question while writing (R60 §5, the log's §5); the "upper bound" claim of the design's first draft was withdrawn (C1-A8). No confirmatory weight rests on it.

7. What this changes in the framework

Written into framework/v0.2 as §7.51, v0.2.51.

8. Limits

  1. No word-order primary exists. Nothing here may be cited as a rate of inversion in either hand. Both PR1 (matched-poem) and PR2 (within-Payne spill) are unreported.
  2. The gold key is one coder, who also wrote the coding definition; double-coded (0.967 self-agreement) but not independent. An independent human coder is unbuilt and has been on the record as unbuilt for twenty-three sessions.
  3. A null on the HABIT account is not fully separable from an instrument that cannot read natural verse (C1-A14, C2-A10). The restored floor shows a seat can detect a constructed contrast; that two of three frontier-and-reserve seats fail it is itself the limit.
  4. Q2 lost five batches of 12 (60 items) to truncation at the probed cap — note (bsf), a sixth firing, and this run honoured the note (the cap was probed at the dispatch batch size and passed) and was bitten anyway on later items of the same shape. Q2 failed its gate regardless, so the loss changed no verdict; it is recorded, not repaired. The bodies were not re-bought.
  5. The translation limb is exploratory (§6), by one hand that knew the question.
  6. Tier D is NOT PASSED.

9. Cost

$3.402299275 of a declared $3.50-effective ceiling (design-v2 §11 set $4.50; the run came in under $3.50). UTC day 2026-09-03 opened at $0.00 of $5.00.

stage calls actual
C pre-run critics, C1+C2, cap 12000 — both NEEDS-REDESIGN, 28 findings 2 $0.089021400
cap/price probes, three seats at the dispatch batch size — note (bsf) 3 $0.130562125
B blind coding, Q1, 447 items, 19 batches of 24, 0 dead 19 $1.017083600
B blind coding, Q2, 447 items, 38 batches of 12, 5 dead (truncation) 38 $1.425220500
B blind coding, Q3, 447 items, 19 batches of 24, 0 dead 19 $0.740411650
per-request sum, and the ledgered figure 81 $3.402299275

config/models.md was corrected upward before dispatch — openai/gpt-5.6-terra reads $2.00 / $12.00 from the API, double the stale $1.00 / $6.00 the table carried, the first upward move this project has recorded and the first that could breach a ceiling. The ceiling was set from the read price, and note (bsw) now requires reading every dispatched seat's price in the session that dispatches it.

Snapshots: opening (after the critic pass) 247.816893901, closing 251.219193176, delta $3.402299275 against a per-request sum of $3.402299275 — exact to 1e-9, and the exactness is because the opening snapshot already carried the critics. Per note (bso) the snapshot is an observation; the per-request sum is the ledgered figure.

The translation limb, the selection rule, both gold coding passes, all extraction and every arithmetic are the lead's own and are not ledgered (charter §3, A4).

Verifier: 26 checks, 0 failures; 5 of 5 mutations caught (runs/RS-20260903b-line-end-order/analyse.py --verify, --mutate). Every mutation targets a figure this page reports on the withholding path — the deciding gate, the enjambment finding, the between-run agreement, the gold self-agreement — because there is no primary to mutate.