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idARM-atelier-cycle
statusresolved
created2026-08-01
updated2026-08-06
trackT1
budgetcadence
used8
consecutive0
last_workedS120
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ARM-atelier-cycle — the second long work; translation as the point again

CLOSED resolved at S120, 8 visits. «Köyhää kansaa» is translated whole (13,517 Finnish → 20,276 English, 571 paragraphs to 571, D1–D128, V1–V28, five errata, the book collated entire) and the craft report is written: wiki/findings/essays/ES-20260806-craft-report-koyhaa-kansaa.md. Its central claim is measured, not recollected — RS-20260806d-first-span-again.

Deliverable: sustained translation practice (charter §3 Track 1, "the long work"; wiki/tracks.md §Deliverables, T1). Constituted 2026-08-01 (S082) in the Tom-directed refocus, as the successor ARM-longwork named when it closed at S052: a second work, chosen for more than one unframed proverb, so that U6 could actually be settled.

Question

What does a long work teach that short pieces cannot — sustained voice, cumulative characterization, motif and terminology consistency, fatigue of method — on a second work, in a second language, now that the first (Verga, 11,474 words, six visits) is done?

The atelier has not been the point of a session since S057's revision study; the ledger recorded "prose translated in order to be measured" fifteen times in fifty sessions. This arm is where translation is the point.

Done when

The chosen work is translated whole, in spans on cadence, each span filed as a first-class artifact with its frozen log; a closing craft report states what the length made visible (ARM-longwork's closing shape), including honest nulls. Where the evaluation ladder wants a regime pair on this material, a span may be produced under two regimes as craft — the pair is banked for ARM-first-judgment's successors, and the session's writing is still about the translating.

Cadence (the budget for a serial work)

One visit at least every three sessions once started — under-visiting is this arm's alarm, exactly as over-budget is every other arm's (ARM-longwork precedent, S039/S042). Expected span count declared at step 1 when the work is chosen; 4–6 visits is the norm the estimate should justify.

Steps

# step state
1 Choose the work — contamination selection gate first; free source; length; a binding register; the woman-author gap done, S085 — Minna Canth, «Köyhää kansaa» (1886), Finnish→English, eight spans declared; span 1 frozen as T-koyhaa-kansaa-R05-v1 with a 23-decision log; register.md opened with ten bound rules and five questions for span 2
2 Span 2 — paragraphs 76–133, the landlord scene to the flour shop done, S090 — 1,782 Finnish → 2,758 English (factor 1.55), 58:58 paragraphs, 23-decision log D24–D46, two errata (V10→V10a, V14→V14a); all five §Unresolved questions answered, four closed and one escalated; study limb RS-20260802d-class-line-carry
3 Span 3 — ¶134–206, the road to the bishop's and the ladies in the poor room done, S095 — 1,795 Finnish → 2,778 English (factor 1.548), 73:73 paragraphs, log D47–D64; all four §Unresolved questions settled; two errata, one of them reverting a decision taken the same morning; study limb RS-20260803b-honorific-carry
4 Span 4 — ¶207–295, the neighbours, the railway wages, and the night done, S100 — 1,800 Finnish → 2,747 English (factor 1.548→1.526), 89:89 paragraphs, log D65–D83; the external dependency discharged: the 1886 Edlund first edition found, collated, and made the copy-text (V21); all four §Unresolved questions answered; study limb RS-20260803g-distance-not-deference
5 Span 5 — ¶296–375, the end of chapter I and the night of chapter II done, S105 — gate first: ¶2–206 collated, 16 substantive divergences in 5,372 words, Erratum 5 on three sentences, a third EL-family corruption at ¶134; then 2,041 Finnish → 2,982 English (factor 1.461), 80:80 paragraphs, log D84–D98, translated from the copy-text rather than collated after; new rule V24; study limb RS-20260804e-whose-mind
6 Span 6 — ¶376–441, the day Anni dies and Mari's mind goes; gate first, ¶376–572 collated done, S110 — gate: 4,308 words, 68 rows, 23 real print divergences, all adjudicated against the scan, a fifth demonstrated corruption in the reprint (¶490); the whole novella is now collated. Then 1,732 Finnish → 2,516 English (factor 1.461→1.452), 66:66 paragraphs, log D99–D112, thirteen copy-text readings applied first; new rule V25; study limb RS-20260805b-address-or-action
7 Span 7 — ¶442–572, the whole remainder: the doctor, the pastor–doctor argument that is the novella's thesis, Harjula, and the end done, S115 — and the work is translated whole. The eight-span plan was revised to seven before a word was translated (D113): no collation gate was owed, and an eighth span at this arm's actual rhythm was another five sessions for 1,600 words. 2,572 copy-text Finnish → 3,796 English (factor 1.476), 131:131 paragraphs, log D113–D128, ten copy-text readings applied first. Three new register rules V26–V28, all four §Unresolved questions answered, and V25 superseded. Study limb RS-20260805g — primary withheld by its own gate
8 The craft report — and it is now the only thing left. It owes: the cadence overrun on all seven visits; what the length made visible; the honest nulls; and the whole-work figures on this page done, S120 — and the arm closes resolved at 8 visits. ES-20260806-craft-report-koyhaa-kansaa, with all four owed items answered and its central claim measured rather than recollected (RS-20260806d)

Blocks / blocked by

Blocks nothing; blocked by nothing. Runs interleaved with the evaluation ladder by ordinary rotation — after ARM-tierD-run's two consecutive sessions, T1 will be near the top of the selection again.

Constraints

Log