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«Szent Péter esernyője» — binding register

What this is. R05 §4's instrument: the terminology, naming and voice decisions that bind later spans of Part I, each citing the log decision that made it, plus an explicit Unresolved section the next span is required to settle. Revisions require an erratum on the translation page.

What this is not. It is not a claim that the rules are good. Every rule here is internal-judgment-only, and the register's known failure mode is on record twice: it catches forward drift and is structurally blind backwards (ARM-longwork on Verga, S047; RS-20260806d on Canth, S120 — eleven sites the closed register would have rendered differently and no erratum caught). This arm inherits that finding and does not claim to have fixed it.

Bound rules

id rule from
V1 Copy-text is Révai 1910 (part1-source-1910.txt), eclectic: M is followed where R slips. Every departure from R is logged D1
V2 Frozen spans are never silently repaired. Corrections found later go in §Errata with a number and a date, and the craft report carries the argument D2, R05 §2
V3 Personal names keep Hungarian forms in Western order: Bélyi János → János Bélyi, Szlávik Péter → Péter Szlávik. Inherited from span A span A
V4 Honorifics: kegyelmed / ő kigyelme → your worship / his worship; uram after a name → Master (Master Máté Billeghi); tisztelendő úr → reverend sir in address, the reverend gentleman or his reverence in reference; bíró uram → your worship (the judge) D5, span A
V5 kendtek and the plural familiar are carried by phrasing (you good folk), never by a pronoun. English has none D5
V6 The two past tenses in speech tags are a declared loss. Every tag is rendered with a plain English past — said, asked, cried, remarked — and the mondá / mondta alternation is carried nowhere. Inverted tags (said he) and archaic tag verbs (quoth) are both forbidden: the first marks the prose as Victorian translation, the second as comic. Its ground changed the day it was written: RS-20260808g measured the loss and there is none — four independent hands rendered the two forms identically at 11 of 11 sites (delta 0.0000) while the same measure saw a tense change at 1.0000. The rule stands as a measured non-loss, and may still only change by erratum D6, RS-20260808g
V7 Animal and place names are translated where the text makes a point of the meaning and kept where it does not. Sármány/Fecske → Yellowhammer/Swallow (the narrator gives them a paragraph); Visztula → Vistula (the narrator's parenthesis is about rivers); Bimbó stays (spoken in a sentence about milk, meaning nothing there) D10
V8 The narrator glosses or he does not, and the translator does not take over the office. Idioms of dying (laid down her spoon, hands in the key) stand unglossed; where Mikszáth glosses in text (a friar's penny is what they call…) or in a footnote (zlevka), the gloss is carried in the same place and form D8
V9 Narratorial parentheses stay parentheses, and general maxims inside them stay in the present tense D11
V10 Untranslated Hungarian is not used as a device. A novel with no other untranslated Hungarian cannot carry a bare te or almázia; where the Hungarian word is the only carrier, the loss is logged instead D3, D7
V11 hold → acre. Not yoke, not cadastral hold: the sentence is comic outbidding and the unit must be one the reader can hear a number in D14 (¶94–95)
V6a V6 is scoped to speech tags, which is the only material anything has measured. It says nothing about the same morphology elsewhere; where the marked forms fall outside tags, V12 governs D29
V12 DEMOTED THE SAME SESSION IT WAS WRITTEN — a translator's reading, unsupported by the census, not a bound rule. As written: the archaic layer outside speech tags is marked by scriptural lexis and syntax, never by bent verb morphology (járulának, eltemettetének, jövének, vagynak → went up in procession before, wherein they were buried, they came unto her, all they that have). RS-20260809e tested it on the whole novel and the registered primary failed at p = 0.1253, with six of the seven paragraphs carrying the apparent effect inside Part I, the part that generated the rule. The reading is kept and span D's marking stands as done; span E is required to re-decide it (§Unresolved 2). Not deleted: the test is underpowered — 40 of 55 tokens immovable — and a dispersed register would not show up in it D29, demoted by RS-20260809e §6
V13 -né is Mrs + the husband's full name on first mention, Mrs X thereafter: Adamecz Mátyásné → Mrs Mátyás Adamecz, then Mrs Adamecz; Gongoly Mihályné → Mrs Mihály Gongoly. Consistent with V3's Western order D42
V14 The diminutive honorific is carried by a postposed endearment, not by a diminutive. Tisztelendő atyuska → reverend father dear; szent atyuskám → my holy father dear; lelkem tisztelendő úr → my dear reverend sir; édes lelkem → my dear soul. Not little father — that is Slavic-Russian and imports the wrong book D25
V15 The villagers' periphrases for the umbrella are never collapsed into umbrella. szerszám implement · vászontányér canvas platter · vászonsátor canvas tent · vászonkarika forma canvas-hoop affair · furcsa alkotmány queer contrivance. Glogova has no umbrella and therefore no word for one; normalising deletes the fact D24
V16 The historic present is carried, not normalised (¶149's storm, ¶157's nincsen). Distinct from V9, which governs present-tense maxims inside narratorial parentheses D32
V17 kend singular, addressed downward, is carried by phrasing — my man + imperative — as V5 carries plural kendtek by you good folk. English has no pronoun for either D27
V18 The iterative present is carried, and it is distinct from V16. ¶249–¶251 slide out of the preterite into a customary present (mesélik, látni vélik, elbeszélik, száll, viszik, tartja, dől) and stay there for three paragraphs. English is not allowed to convert it to a habitual would tell / would fetch: the legend is still travelling at the moment of narration, which is what ¶250's future-tense parenthesis depends on. V16 governs the dramatic historic present; this is the other one D57
V19 Slovak words the narrator himself footnotes are kept in the source form, with the footnote translated in place. «mentyék», «mágnács», on the zlevka precedent. V10 does not reach them — V10 forbids untranslated Hungarian as a translator's device, and these are marked as Slovak by Mikszáth and glossed by him D52, V8
V20 tekintetes uram → your honour, and it may not collide with V4's your worship. The village judge of Haláp is your worship (bíró uram); the district magistrate is your honour. Hungarian is using two distinct titles for two distinct offices and English has the pair D73
V21 A designation the source varies is not collapsed, and a designation the source repeats is not varied. Both halves are one rule. Varied: tanítóné/rektorné/kántorné for one dead woman in six paragraphs → schoolmaster's widow / rector's wife / cantor's wife; tanító/mester → schoolmaster / master. Repeated: méltóztat- at ¶10, ¶42, ¶44 → "pleased to" at all three, although English has a locally better word at each. V15 is the varied half's first instance D69, D68, V15
V22 « » are reserved for Mikszáth's marked Slovak; ordinary quoted speech takes double quotes. R's own guillemets do not distinguish the two. The English does, which is what makes V19's marking visible on the page D76

One precedent, not yet a rule. Typographic emphasis is carried — R italicises _anyós_ at ¶20 and it is rendered italic (D65). It is the first and only italic in Part I, and M has none anywhere, so one instance is not a rule; the next one has a precedent to cite.

Unresolved — the craft report is required to settle these

  1. V12's fate — measured at S149 and STILL NOT FOUNDED, and the declared price was not paid because the declaration was wrong. RS-20260810b masked every census past-tense form out of the novel and out of three size-matched comparators and asked whether marked narration paragraphs carry Károli phrasing in what remains. They do not: +0.0087, p = 0.4392; and against an archaizing-secular control (five historical novels) the contrast is negative, −0.0073, p = 0.7281 — the marked paragraphs look more like Kemény and Jósika than like the Bible. V12 therefore stays demoted; it is not struck, because a non-rejection is a failure to found and not a refutation — the pre-run critic's amendment A9, which also cancelled D47's declared erratum before the run. Erratum 1 did not fire. What the register now says about the marking, and the craft report must resolve it: the King James rendering at span D's ¶162–¶164 and span E's ¶240–¶244 is an explicitly unsupported translator's judgment — two designs have now failed to put a measurement behind it. The live defence is the clause-level reading (RS-20260810b §7, internal-judgment-only): ¶244's «Lőn nagy ámulás, bámulás, népek csodálkozása» sits at the 22.8th percentile of Károli overlap once its own lőn is masked, because what remains of the paragraph is a smithy, quilts, pillows and a cart — so the scriptural marking may be clause-local and V12 written at the wrong grain. Defend it there or issue erratum 1.
  2. D44's registered prediction — TESTED AT S149 AND IT FAILED. Worswick 1900 does not carry Srankóné's price question. But in the same six lines he also drops the mágnács footnote, the three hundred sheep and the chalk, so his omission is weak evidence about his copy-text. D44 stands with reduced confidence and the restored ¶216a is kept. A second, unregistered observation cuts the other way: Worswick has "the white altar-cloth" at ¶227, consistent with M's oltárterítőt — and equally consistent with a translator tidying, which is the mechanism D45 attributed to M's editor. The craft report carries both.
  3. What the change of copy-text cost. ARM-legend §Done-when names it and nothing has totalled it: two inherited chapters from M, four chapters collated against R, two false ⚑ rows (D43), one restored line (D44), and four punctuation divergences the method cannot see (D46, ¶208 at S144).
  4. The register's backwards blindness, inherited from ARM-longwork (S047) and RS-20260806d (S120) and not fixed here. Part I is now complete; the craft report is the first chance to read it whole against the closed register.

Discharged