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linkswiki/arms/ARM-radif-hands.md, wiki/findings/results/RS-20260829-radif-hands.md, framework/v0.2/README.md, config/models.md, config/budget.md, workshop/translations/hafez-sahar-bolbol/R55-v1/translation.md, runs/RS-20260831b-radif-hands/payne_all.py, runs/RS-20260831b-radif-hands/code_payne.py

The predictor put to a whole book: Payne's 199 odes against the Persian radif census

ARM-radif-hands step 2 (T5). Frozen before any classification was bought and before any matching beyond the ten-item probe. Nothing here is a judgment of quality; no reader is asked anything; Tier D is NOT PASSED, so no sentence may say anyone hears, prefers or wants anything.

1. The question, and why step 1 could not answer it

framework/v0.2 §7.36.1 and §7.40 tell a translator, before the first English line, that certain Persian radifs cannot be carried. RS-20260829-radif-hands refuted the printed impossibility on nine matched items and two hands, downgraded both clauses to costly, at the price of an inversion in an archaizing register (§7.41), and said in its own limits that nine items settle an existence claim and cannot support a rate.

Step 2 is the powered version. Payne 1901 volume 1 is the whole of Brockhaus I–CC, 199 odes printed (he omits XIV as spurious, in his own footnote), and he did not choose his poems — he translated the Divan entire, which is the selection confound Leaf's twenty-eight cannot shed.

P1 (primary). Among the Ganjoor ghazals Payne translated in volume 1 that the frozen census gives a radif, does the radif's grammatical cell predict whether Payne carries a repeated English tail?

P2 (primary). Among the ghazals the census finds radif-free, how often does Payne's English carry a repeated tail anyway — i.e. how often does the English manufacture a repetition the Persian has not got?

P2 exists because step 1 saw Leaf do exactly this at two items, both of them ghazals whose repeated element is a bound person-suffix that the census rule does not count as a radif, and registered it as an observation on two items. 190 of the census's 495 ghazals are radif-free; the ones inside Brockhaus I–CC give the first properly denominated estimate this project can make.

2. Materials, all already on the shelf or free

3. Procedure

Stage A — carriage coding, mechanical, already run and frozen. runs/RS-20260831b-radif-hands/code_payne.py, the rule and the bar declared in its docstring before the numbers were read: an ode carries an English tail iff one trailing sequence of 1–3 words closes ≥ 0.80 of its extracted rhyme lines and ≥ 4 of them. Tokenisation and the Levenshtein-1 merge of scanner variants are step 1's carriage.py unchanged. Result, frozen at commit time: 134 of 199 odes carry a tail (0.673), sensitivity 0.60→146, 0.70→142, 0.80→134, 0.90→107, 1.00→99.

Stage M — the match, bought from two disjoint seats. Each seat is shown the 495 Persian matla's, numbered, and Payne's English opening couplet, and returns an index and a confidence. Payne's coded English tail is never shown to either seat: the tail is half the measurement, and showing it would let the match be made on the very correspondence under test. 199 items, 20 per call, 10 calls per seat. Seats: P1 openai/gpt-5.6-terra and P2 google/gemini-3.6-flash — disjoint labs, per RS-20260830b-rhyme-family's finding that a shared rater is this instrument's first fault.

A match is accepted only where the two seats return the same index. Disagreements and NONEs are dropped, not adjudicated by the lead: the lead wrote the rule under test.

Stage G — the grammatical cell, bought blind from three seats. Every distinct radif among the accepted, radif-bearing matches is shown inside its own maṭlaʿ, with no English, no rule and no prediction, to P1, P2 and P3 (x-ai/grok-4.5), against the closed checklist step 1 used (RS-20260829-radif-hands §8): part of speech, is it a case particle, is it a finite verb, is it transitive, is it a copula, does it stand in an ezāfe to the word before it, plus a gloss. Ten radifs per call. The cell is the 2-of-3 majority on each bit.

Stage V — verification. verify.py recomputes every reported number from the raw JSON, and runs with --mutate to confirm the checks can fail.

4. Registered predictions

framework/v0.2 as it stands after §7.41 is the thing being predicted from.

Every one of these can fail, and PR3 and PR4 are the ones that would most change the framework. PR3 failing upward would restore a version of §7.36.1; PR4 failing upward would put a wholly new clause in, about English manufacturing a repetition Persian has not got.

5. Failure and withholding criteria, declared before the run

6. What this design cannot do

  1. One hand. Payne is one translator with one register. Nothing here separates what English can host from what Payne's archaizing English hosts; §7.42 measured that price separately and this design does not re-measure it.
  2. The census's definition. A radif is a repeated word sequence, so bound-suffix repetitions are radif-free by definition and land in P2 by construction. That is stated, not hidden: P2 is a measurement of manufacture against this definition, and the definition is the standard one.
  3. Brockhaus is not Qazvini–Ghani. Payne translated a different edition, which prints more couplets than Ganjoor at some poems (step 1 found this at two of nine). Carriage is coded on Payne's own printed lines and the census on Ganjoor's, so a poem can have a different number of positions on each side. Nothing in the coding compares the two counts.
  4. The seats classify grammar; they do not validate it. They are a reproducibility and independence diagnostic, exactly as in step 1.
  5. Not a claim about readers. Tier D is NOT PASSED.

7. Budget

Declared ceiling $2.20 for the UTC day 2026-08-31, which had $0.00 spent before this session. Probe already spent: $0.026584 (P1, the ten anchors, 10 of 10 correct). Estimate: stage M 10 calls × 2 seats ≈ $0.60; stage G ~10 calls × 3 seats ≈ $0.35; stage C critic 2 calls ≈ $0.15. Worst case is built from the max_tokens cap each call actually permits, per note (abc), and every cap is probed on this task shape per note (bsf).