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E-20260824c — round-1 critic findings and what was done about each

One round, P1 and P2, $0.118432. P1 returned twelve findings (4 BLOCKING, 7 MAJOR, 1 MINOR) and VERDICT: NEEDS REDESIGN. P2 returned three (2 MAJOR, 1 MINOR) and its reply was cut off by the token cap before its verdict line — recorded as such; its three findings are answered in full.

Fifteen findings. Fifteen accepted, none refused. Four of them changed the design's structure. No second round was bought: note (bqp) buys one only where the first killed a numbered primary and the revision might not have fixed it, and every revision below either removes the criticised quantity or replaces it with a stronger one. The design is v2; v1 is in git at ef22a3df's successor.

The four that changed the structure

P1-2 and P1-3 (both BLOCKING) — the B0 subtraction cannot remove the effect of the rewritten carrier line, only a general word preference. Accepted, and this is the finding that rebuilt the experiment. v1 estimated the chime as hit(D2) − hit(B0); but D2 differs from B0 in two ways — line 2 chimes with the target and line 2 has been rewritten — and only the first is the manipulation. Two control placements were added: D2c rewrites line 2 exactly as D2 does but to a word in a different rhyme family, and D1c does the same for line 3. The registered chime estimates become

Δ_D2 = hit(D2) − hit(D2c) and Δ_D1 = hit(D1) − hit(D1c),

each holding the fact of a rewritten carrier line constant and varying only whether it chimes. The B0-referenced quantities are still computed and printed, as the carrier effects hit(D1c) − hit(B0) and hit(D2c) − hit(B0) — which is what P1-3 asked to see. Cells rise from 126 to 210. P1-2's own remedy (use each rhyme-bearing line at both distances) is not available: the bearer for D1 is line 3 and for D2 is line 2, and they cannot be exchanged without changing which line ends the quatrain. The control pair is the reachable form of it and the design now says so.

P1-4 (BLOCKING) — L6's D2 line ended is read, which is ordinarily /riːd/, not /rɛd/. Accepted without reservation, and the tool did not catch it because CMUdict carries both pronunciations and tools/rhyme_pairs.py relates two bearers if any pair of their pronunciations relates. The rule is right for its purpose and wrong here: a reader reading the written decree is read in the passive present does not hear /rɛd/. L6 was rebuilt on an unambiguous family: w+ told / w− said, D2 partner takes **hold, D1 partner the dead man's mould, with controls takes **effect and the dead man's clay. This is a real instrument limit and is recorded on the result page, not only here: a mechanical rhyme grader that accepts any dictionary pronunciation can certify a chime a reader will not get.**

P1-6 and P2-1 — F4 pruned loci on the reporting seats' own judgement, asymmetrically. Accepted. F4 no longer drops anything. Stage A is now a declared descriptive check reported in full for both w+ and w− (P2-1's point: an unfaithful w− inflates every hit rate as surely as an unfaithful w+), and any locus flagged for either word gets a printed sensitivity analysis with that locus excluded, alongside the primary. Nothing is pruned on an outcome-adjacent model judgement.

P1-8 — the planted word was always third in a fixed candidate order. Accepted. Candidate order is now randomised per (locus, seat) with seed 20260824 and the map recorded per cell.

The rest

# finding disposition
P1-1 QR's place in the counts and the analysis is ambiguous Accepted. §4 now states it: QR receives 70 stage-P calls (7 × 5 × 2), is never pooled with P1/P2, and its figures are reported under a separate heading with no bar attached, exactly as RS-20260824 §4 did. Stage P = 210 calls.
P1-5 the w+/w− pairs are not equal in idiomaticity, so B0 is not a stable baseline Accepted as a limit and as a diagnostic. Δ is a within-locus, within-placement difference, so a locus-specific word preference cancels unless it is at floor or ceiling — which is what F2 tests. Per-locus hit(B0), hit(D1c) and hit(D2c) are now printed, and any locus unanimous across all twelve of its reference observations is flagged with a sensitivity analysis (P1-12's remedy). The pairs were not replaced: the whole design rests on their being what a translator would actually write, and the regime required both to be defensible on the sense before either was used.
P1-7 stage A tests only addition, not omission or comparative adequacy Accepted. The stage-A prompt now asks, per candidate, for one of ADDS / LOSES / FINE against the Persian, and both w+ and w− are judged on the same scale.
P1-9 one call per cell at temperature 0, against a measured 0.076 instability Accepted, with a registered contingency rather than a blanket repeat. The two orders are two independent calls per (locus, placement, seat), so every reference cell already has six observations. And it is now registered that if Δ_D1 lands within ±0.05 of the +0.25 gate, or Δ_D2 within ±0.05 of +0.15, a full repeat of the affected placement pair is bought before any verdict is written.
P1-10 side-by-side forced choice makes the changed word salient and invites deliberate rhyme-hunting Accepted, and it narrows the claim. The salience is identical in all five placements, so it cannot produce a difference between them — but it does mean the construct is preference under explicit comparison, not registration in ordinary reading. §9 now says so and the result page says it in its headline sentence. The extent statement Δ_D1 − Δ_D2 is the quantity least exposed to it, because D1 and D2 are matched on salience exactly.
P1-11 the ceiling is not enforceable under a thread pool, and the worst case already exceeded it Accepted. Concurrency is capped at 6, so at most six calls are in flight; the stop-loss is checked before every dispatch and again between placement batches; input tokens are in the worst case; and the ceiling is raised to $1.20 against today's remaining $1.777, with the worst case recomputed to fit under it.
P1-12 F2's baseline test is pooled and hides locus-level extremes Accepted — see P1-5.
P2-2 R3's prediction band [0.35, 0.65] and F2's failure band [0.20, 0.80] are inconsistent Accepted. Both are now [0.20, 0.80], and both apply to the two reference placements D1c and D2c (which the primaries subtract) as well as to B0.
P2-3 stage A does not say which placement supplies lines 1–3 Accepted. Stage A always uses the B0 lines, stated in §4.

What the round cost, and what it bought

$0.118432 — a quarter of the run's whole budget, spent before a single datum. It bought a pronunciation defect that would have silently attenuated the primary at one locus in seven, and a confound that would have made any positive result unattributable. The v1 design would have produced a number and the number would not have meant what the page said it meant.