Translating Without a Judge

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E-20260809a — the second language pair, and the gate that withheld the first one, repaired

Frozen before dispatch. The translation limb it hangs on (T-kokoro-R06-v1, «こころ» 上・十三) was written from the Japanese alone and committed at 9d4de2f, before this design existed.

1. The question, and what step 1 left owing

framework/v0.2 §8 Q-d: where a source marks a relation by a change of form across a text — a switch of pronoun, an onset of honorifics, a drop of a title — does English carry the change, and which devices carry it?

ARM-trajectory step 1 (E-20260808h, S139) put that question to Russian and the run withheld its own answer: the source-side gate returned +0.667 against a registered +1.00, F1 fired, P2 was withheld. Note (bkv) names the reason and it is arithmetic, not design — the gate got 2 ratings per site where the primary got 6. Step 2 of the arm is written to fix exactly that and to add the second pair.

So this design does two things, and the first one is a repair the arm declared in advance:

2. What the translation limb contributed, and the wire

The lead translated «こころ» 上・十三 whole — the walk at Ueno in which Sensei, who has held the narrator at the courteous distance of あなた + です・ます for the length of their acquaintance, breaks twice: at ¶18 into plain forms and the familiar 君 («――君、黒い長い髪で縛られた時の 心持を知っていますか»), at ¶21 into unbroken plain forms («悪い事をした… あなたを焦慮していたの だ»), and then deliberately rebuilds the polite frame to close the scene («とにかく恋は罪悪ですよ、 よござんすか»).

The translator's log, frozen at 9d4de2f, records what English could and could not do with that. Its D2 put the whole trajectory on contraction, sentence length and directive force, the only exponents English has. Its D3 records that ¶18's 君 was rendered by adding two words that are not in the Japanese ("see here, my boy") — converting a pronoun into a vocative, a change of device. Its D4 records the other 君, at ¶23, and that nothing in the English marks it at all, because there it is a subject pronoun and English deletes it.

The wire, one sentence. The translation limb generates the problem — a translator facing a relational change carried by predicate morphology and pronoun choice, neither of which the target language has — and the study limb asks which of the devices a translator might reach for instead is actually recoverable by a reader who is told nothing.

3. Contamination, and one thing this run does not have

T-kokoro-R06-v1 declares suspected and unmeasured, because no published English of «こころ» is freely reachable (Gutenberg holds only Botchan and Kusamakura for Sōseki; McClellan 1958 and McKinney 2010 are in copyright). The note (bhb) repository check was run before the section was selected and returns zero: the project has no prior rendering of this novel.

Two consequences, both stated rather than smoothed. (i) The lead writes no arm of this experiment, as at S139 — the three hands are independent models — and §十三 is excluded from the site pool, so no hand renders the lead's passage. (ii) S139's stage 8, the published-translator census, has no analogue here. That census — Garnett letting Chekhov's mid-sentence correction go — was one of the most informative things in the previous result, and this run cannot do it. It is a real loss and it is the price of choosing the language pair over the comparator.

4. Materials

Source. 夏目漱石『こころ』(1914), Aozora Bunko 000148/773_14560, 底本『こころ』集英社文庫, PD-old-70 (Sōseki d. 1916). materials/kokoro.txt, 1,331 paragraphs, 160,234 non-whitespace characters, decoded cp932 and cleaned by tools/fetch_aozora.py.

Candidate pool, generated mechanically by pool.py, committed before any span was read for content. A candidate is a maximal contiguous paragraph run within one section such that:

The pool is 20 candidates — 16 POLITE, 4 PLAIN. The imbalance is a property of the novel: part 上 is the narrator with Sensei and his wife, and it is polite on both sides; the plain-register dialogue is in part 中, with the narrator's family. Widening the character window to 200–700 and to 150–900 was tried before any span was read and returned 4 PLAIN candidates both times, so the window stayed where it was written. The design is built around 4, and says below what that costs.

A second mechanical census, also before reading: address terms inside dialogue across the whole novel — あなた 96 · 先生 75 · 君 37 · お前 37 · 奥さん 17, against name-plus-suffix forms in the low single figures. This is why the positive control below is a title/pronoun contrast and not the name-form contrast S139 used: «こころ» does not have one.

5. Procedure

Stages run in the order given. Every dispatch runs in the background — note (bid) has fired three times on a shell timeout killing a call OpenRouter had already billed, and its corollary has been recommended three times and applied once.

  1. snapshot open — GET /api/v1/key.
  2. Stage 0 — two pre-run critics, on different labs (note (bhf): one critic pass is not adversarial coverage when the seat can return nothing). C1 mistralai/mistral-medium-3-5; C2 nvidia/nemotron-3-ultra-550b-a55b dispatched with "reasoning": {"enabled": false} — note (bkw), applied before the failure rather than after it, the first time this project has done so. Neither is a hand, a rater or a gate seat.
  3. Stage R — the Russian re-gate. S139's sixteen Russian spans, byte-identical, read from ../E-20260808h-trajectory/run/sites.json. Three seats × two calls, sixteen items per call, one arm per site per call, alternating by call so that every site receives 3 ratings of arm F and 3 of arm S — 6 per site, the same as S139's English primary. Same prompt as S139 stage 6, same OK/FLAG grammaticality field, same bar.
  4. Stage 1 — independent scene screen. All 20 candidates to one non-hand, non-rater seat (mistralai/mistral-medium-3-5), neutral prompt naming no device and no hypothesis: for each passage, how many people take part in the conversation (TWO / MORE-THAN-TWO / UNCLEAR), the name or description of the person spoken to, the name or description of the speaker. This removes the lead's discretion over the judgement the manipulation depends on.
  5. Stage 2 — site selection, by a rule fixed here and applied to stage 1's output without further judgement. - Every TWO PLAIN candidate becomes a MAIN site, up to 4. - Walk the TWO POLITE candidates in pool-index order, assigning alternately to MAIN and to POS, MAIN first, until MAIN holds 4 POLITE sites and POS holds 4. A POLITE candidate is POS-eligible only if its tail carries ≥ 1 address token (先生 / 奥さん / あなた / 君 / お前); one that is not is passed to MAIN and the alternation continues. - Result: 12 sites — MAIN 8 (4 POLITE, 4 PLAIN), POS 4 (POLITE). If fewer than 4 PLAIN survive the screen the MAIN deficit is made up from POLITE and the imbalance is reported.
  6. Stage 3 — the manipulation. For each site the split point is the paragraph boundary nearest the character-count midpoint. Only text at or after the split is touched. In both blocks arm F is the printed text and arm S is the manipulated tail — a simplification of S139, where POS manufactured both arms because its tails often carried no vocative; here every POS tail already carries an address token, so replacement suffices and the arm-F baseline is the same kind of thing in both blocks. - MAIN — the predicate-register trajectory. Arm S: every sentence-final predicate inside a quoted utterance at or after the split is converted to the other register (です・ます ↔ plain), with the agreement that conversion requires (copula, negation, tense, request forms, the explanatory のです/んだ). No word outside a predicate is added, removed or changed, and no address term is touched. Direction: POLITE sites move toward familiarity, PLAIN sites move toward formality. - POS — the address-term trajectory, the positive control. Arm S: every address token at or after the split is moved between the title class (先生 / 奥さん) and the second-person pronoun class (あなた / 君 / お前), the variant chosen to fit the dyad the screen named. Predicates are left alone. Direction is 2 and 2: the first and third POS sites in index order move toward familiarity (title → pronoun), the second and fourth toward formality (pronoun → title); a site can serve a direction only if its tail carries a token of the source class, and the rule falls through in index order until it can. - Orientation. Every rating is oriented so that positive = in the direction the manipulation went. This is what lets the two directions be added rather than cancelled, and what stops a rater's standing tendency to read later text as cooler from counting as an effect. Imported unchanged from S139 §5.4, whose A3 amendment defended it against the pre-run critic. - Manipulated texts and a residual checker's output are committed to run/sites.json before dispatch. Every hand edit is an ordered phrase rule in overrides.json whose find-string is a hard error if absent.
  7. Stage 4 — the hands. Three, none the lead, none Anthropic: H1 deepseek/deepseek-v4-pro, H2 openai/gpt-5.6-terra, H3 x-ai/grok-4.5 — the same three as S139, for comparability. Each receives all 12 spans in one call, numbered, in site order, every source paragraph numbered [site.paragraph] with one output line required per input line (S139's A2 repair, imported), and is asked only to translate. No hand sees both arms of any site: with three hands each site is rendered three times, split 2/1 between arms, the singleton arm alternating with the site's position and the singleton hand rotating (assign.py).
  8. Stage 5 — the reading probe, the measure. Three seats, none a hand: R1 google/gemini-3.6-flash, R2 qwen/qwen3.7-max, R3 z-ai/glm-5.2. Two calls each, 12 items per call, one rendering per site per call, rendering index (r + 2k + i) mod 3 at site i for rater r, call k — so no call contains two renderings of one span, every rendering is rated at least once, and arms mix within every call. Calls are stateless. Each item is printed as PART ONE / PART TWO at the true split. The prompt is S139's, verbatim, so that the two pairs are measured on one scale:

    Below are N short passages of English prose fiction. They are unrelated to one another. For each passage, consider how the speaker treats the person he or she is speaking to. Comparing the later part of the passage with the earlier part, does the way the speaker treats that person become more distant and formal, become warmer and more familiar, or stay about the same? Answer with exactly one of: MUCH MORE DISTANT, SOMEWHAT MORE DISTANT, ABOUT THE SAME, SOMEWHAT MORE FAMILIAR, MUCH MORE FAMILIAR. Then quote up to twelve words from the passage that most influenced your answer, or write NONE. Output exactly N lines and nothing else, each <number>|<answer>|<quote>.

Coding: MUCH MORE DISTANT +2 · SOMEWHAT MORE DISTANT +1 · ABOUT THE SAME 0 · SOMEWHAT MORE FAMILIAR −1 · MUCH MORE FAMILIAR −2, then oriented per §5.5. 8. Stage 6 — the Japanese source-side gate, at parity. Three seats × two calls, twelve Japanese items per call, one arm per site per call, alternating by call: 6 ratings per site, 3 per arm — the same precision as the English primary. This is the whole of note (bkv)'s repair. Same question, same five-point scale, plus a per-item OK / FLAG:<what> field for anything ungrammatical or unnatural in the Japanese. The seats are the three hands (deepseek-v4-pro, gpt-5.6-terra, grok-4.5), as at S139 and for the reason S139 gave: they read the Japanese source and never any English rendering, so no seat judges its own output, and calls are stateless so nothing carries between stages. The three remaining non-hand, non-rater seats are kimi-k3 and nemotron-3-ultra, which have returned zero-content bodies in four of their last six load-bearing roles, and mistral-medium-3-5, which config/models.md records as weakest of the panel on Japanese texture. Note (bkv)'s corollary is that a gate is the wrong place to economise seats, and competence on the source language is the competence this gate needs. 9. Stage 7 — mechanical census, $0. Over the post-split English of every rendering: contraction rate, mean sentence length, honorific/address tokens (sir, Sensei, Mr, Mrs, madam, my dear, my boy, old man), imperative count. Arm S against arm F, oriented per site. 10. snapshot close; reconcile per-response usage.cost against the key delta.

Judgment is not parallelised. No model rates its own output; the hands, the English raters, the screen, and the critics are four disjoint sets of seats, and the source gate overlaps the hands only on the source language.

6. Predictions, registered

P0 — the Japanese source-side gate. On the 8 MAIN sites, the oriented source-side mean of arm S minus arm F is ≥ +1.00, on 6 ratings per site.

P0R — the Russian re-gate, the repair. On S139's 12 MAIN sites, the oriented source-side mean of arm S minus arm F is ≥ +1.00, on 6 ratings per site. The bar is unchanged from S139; only the precision behind it changes. Registered before dispatch, and reported whatever it returns.

P1 — the instrument gate. On the 4 POS sites, the oriented English-side mean of arm S minus arm F is ≥ +0.75.

P2 — the primary, null-favouring. On the 8 MAIN sites, the oriented English-side mean of arm S minus arm F is ≤ +0.40.

P2 holds → three independent hands do not put a source's predicate-register trajectory into their English in any form a reader recovers, while the same readers recover an address-term change from the same hands on the same material. P2 fails → the change is carried.

Why the Japanese MAIN block is a stronger test than the Russian one was. Russian marks the relation in one pronoun paradigm; Japanese marks it on every finite predicate in every sentence, which in these tails is six to fourteen separate morphemes. If breadth of exponence in the source were enough to force a translator's hand, MAIN would carry here and did not have to carry there. A holding P2 is therefore evidence about kind, not merely about quantity.

On the control, and note (bkt). (bkt) requires a control that manipulates the same component of the grammar as the phenomenon. English has no politeness inflection, so a strictly exponent-matched control does not exist — S139's A5 made this argument for the Russian pronoun and it holds a fortiori here. The address-term contrast is the nearest thing inside the same system: the same relation, changed at the same point in the same passages, judged by the same seats on the same scale, realised through a device English possesses. Q-d names it explicitly — "a drop of a title" — so the control is not off to one side of the question, it is one of the question's three named cases.

P3 — descriptive, no prediction. Stage 7's mechanical census.

Registered in advance: what stage R licenses. If P0R ≥ +1.00, S139's withheld P2 (+0.134) is released with the status released-on-repair — explicitly weaker than a primary released by a gate registered blind, because the quantity was already visible when this repair was registered, and the result page must say so wherever the figure appears. If P0R < +1.00, S139's P2 stays withheld permanently, and the finding is that the Russian pronoun manipulation could not be shown legible in the source even at three times the precision — which is an answer about the manipulation, not about English.

7. Failure criteria, frozen

8. Pre-flight cost estimate

Built from max_tokens, not from expected length (note (abc)).

stage calls model cap worst case
0 critics 2 mistral-medium-3-5 · nemotron-3-ultra 10,000 $0.12
R Russian re-gate 6 deepseek · gpt-5.6-terra · grok-4.5 4,000 $0.10
1 screen 1 mistral-medium-3-5 5,000 $0.04
4 hands 3 deepseek · gpt-5.6-terra · grok-4.5 16,000 $0.30
5 English raters 6 gemini-3.6-flash ×2 · qwen3.7-max ×2 · glm-5.2 ×2 8,000 $0.35
6 Japanese gate 6 deepseek · gpt-5.6-terra · grok-4.5 8,000 $0.30
re-dispatch reserve 4 — — $0.39
declared worst case $1.60

Today's UTC ledger (2026-08-09) stands at $0.00 of $5.00. The worst case fits with $3.40 to spare. Stages 7, the whole translation limb, the pool, the manipulation and all analysis cost $0.

9. What this cannot show


10. Amendments, after the pre-run critics and before dispatch

Both critic seats returned, and note (bkw) was applied before the failure for the first time in this project. mistralai/mistral-medium-3-5 returned NEEDS-REDESIGN, 10 findings for $0.033836; nvidia/nemotron-3-ultra-550b-a55b, dispatched with "reasoning": {"enabled": false}, returned NEEDS-REDESIGN, 10 findings for $0.011126 — the same seat that spent $0.046932 on a zero-content body as the registered critic at S139. Two labs, two verdicts, and the two agree on three of the four blocking issues. Both bodies are in run/.

A1 — the pool's binding parameter, relaxed before any site was selected

The frozen rule returned 4 plain-register candidates, and the first screen called two of them MORE-THAN-TWO (correctly: they are three-party family scenes), leaving 2 — too few for a direction-balanced MAIN block. MIN_PREDS was relaxed 6 → 5; MIN_UTTS was tested and is not the binding parameter (relaxing it alone changes nothing). One parameter, one step, no span read for content. Pool 20 → 27, plain-register 4 → 8. The superseded pool and its screen are preserved at run/pool-v1.json and run/screen-v1.json.

A2 — the screen runs on three seats, majority rule (critic 2 finding 8). Accepted.

mistral-medium-3-5, gpt-5.6-terra, nemotron-3-ultra. A dispatch error is recorded rather than smoothed: the third seat first dispatched was z-ai/glm-5.2, which is one of the three English rater seats and should not have been a screen seat under §5's disjointness claim. It returned a zero-content body ($0.039174, ledgered as waste) and was replaced by nemotron-3-ultra. Calls are stateless, so no information could have passed from a screen call to a rating call, but the seat was replaced regardless. nemotron's screen is degenerate — TWO on all 27 — and contributes no discrimination; the majority is therefore effectively carried by the other two, and where they disagree (2 candidates) the vote goes to TWO. Four candidates are excluded on a MORE-THAN-TWO majority.

A3 — the Japanese gate is measured on six seats, and the independence objection is given teeth

Both critics flagged that the gate seats were the hands (critic 1 BLOCKING 1.1, critic 2 finding 3). Calls are stateless, so the "remembers its own translation" mechanism they propose does not exist; the real objection — shared weights, hence correlated insensitivity — stands, and the panel contains no three competent Japanese seats that are neither hands nor raters. So the gate runs on all six available seats, twelve calls, 12 ratings per site, 6 per arm:

P0 is the pooled figure, and the independence objection is registered as a veto: if the two sub-blocks fall on opposite sides of the +1.00 bar, P2 is withheld whatever the pooled number says. That converts the objection from something the design argues away into something that can stop the run.

A4 — the residual check becomes a positive check (critic 2 finding 5). Accepted, and it fired.

The check no longer asks "has any predicate of the departing register survived" but "is every classifiable predicate in the arm-S tail of the arriving register". It failed immediately on site 24, which is A4b: pool.py's polite pattern cannot see a polite marker followed by から/けれど/が, so 「横着な了簡ですからね」 reads as plain. The pool stays frozen as it ran; the residual check uses the corrected pattern. The correction also reclassifies one selected site — 9, 上十七 ¶1–7, whose tail carries a polite 「叱り付けられそうですから」 — so that span is not register-uniform and never satisfied the pool's own criterion. It is dropped from the selection, not manipulated. Dropping it costs a site and is the conservative direction: an impure site adds noise, and noise makes a null-favouring P2 easier to hold.

A5 — お前 is excluded from conversion toward politeness (critic 2 finding 2). Accepted.

The critic is right that Japanese register normally co-varies across predicate and pronoun, and that お前 + です・ます is pragmatically defective. あなた and 君 are attested with both registers in Sōseki's own hand (§十三 ¶18 君 + polite, ¶21 あなた + plain), which is the evidence that those two are compatible; お前 is not. A candidate whose tail carries お前 and is converting toward politeness is skipped mechanically. One site (25) was excluded by this rule.

A6 — a minimum manipulable unit (critic 1 ADVISORY 3.3). Accepted.

A site must carry ≥ 2 quoted utterances in the tail, ≥ 1 in the head, and ≥ 4 paragraphs, so the manipulation is never a single token and neither half is a fragment. Three candidates excluded.

A7 — the positive control is rebuilt, because the material refused the first one

The frozen POS design swapped a title for a second-person pronoun in the tail. Applied to the selected sites it collapsed: most 先生 tokens in these tails are third-person reference, not address (the narrator talking to Sensei's wife about Sensei), and where the tail's address token is a pronoun it is Sensei's あなた/君 to the narrator, for whom no title exists. Only 2 of 6 POS sites could carry the manipulation at all, and only in one direction.

Replaced before any arm was rendered, with S139's own POS structure: a courtesy formula prepended to the first tail utterance — formal 「失礼ですが、」 against familiar 「なあ、」 — identically placed, both arms manufactured, differing in exactly one constituent, which flip.py asserts by reconstructing arm F from arm S. Direction is 3 formal / 3 familiar. Lexical politeness is the nearest device to predicate politeness that English possesses, which is what the control is for; that POS arm F is therefore not the printed text is the same concession S139 made, for the same reason, and F3 reads on MAIN only.

A8 — what P1 licenses is narrowed in writing (critic 2 finding 1, critic 1 ADVISORY 1.3)

The two blocks differ in exponence density: MAIN converts every finite predicate in the tail (2–8 morphemes per site), POS inserts one constituent. P1 passing therefore shows that the instrument detects a relational change carried by a device English has — not that it is sensitive to a change of MAIN's density. The per-site manipulated-constituent counts are reported beside every figure. This is registered as a limit, not answered.

A9 — hand assignment balanced (critic 1 BLOCKING 4.1). Accepted, and it came out exact.

assign.py searches the singleton-hand choice at each site to minimise the spread of arm-S and plain-register counts across hands. Achieved: 6 F / 6 S for every hand, 1 plain-register arm S each — spread (0, 0).

A10 — stage R's denominator (critic 2 finding 7). Clarified.

All 16 Russian spans are shown in every call, because the prompt is S139's and is asserted byte-for-byte identical to the stored G1 request before dispatch (regate_ru.py refuses to build a spec otherwise). P0R is computed on the 12 MAIN sites only, exactly as S139's P0 was.

A11 — overruled, with reasons

A12 — deviations at dispatch, recorded rather than smoothed