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Repository path: workshop/experiments/E-20260806c-source-grammar/runs/critic-response.md · rendered 2026-09-09

critic-response.md

NEEDS-AMENDMENT

  1. BLOCKING — §2.6 census→P2a/P2b inference is not legitimate. A translator-coded 2×2 on two unmatched loci (5 and 14 second-person tokens; 44 and 9 possessives; opposite dialogue/body-part mix; opposite subject matter; one coded at translation time, one post-hoc on a frozen draft by the same interested agent) cannot ground corpus-level grammar predictions. Contrast can arise with zero contribution from German vs Spanish grammar: (i) narration-heavy body-part text vs dialogue-heavy abstract-possessive text; (ii) content-driven obligatory possessives (den Kopf sites) absent in the Quijote locus; (iii) dialogue-share difference alone driving you-supply counts; (iv) binomial noise at these n; (v) Storm vs Cervantes, not DE vs ES; (vi) coder-boundary choices on the same hand whose prediction they feed; (vii) different translation conditions (live log vs retrospective coding). Remedy: Demote P2a/P2b/P2b⁻ to exploratory mechanism hypotheses with no arm-closing power; arm-closing rests only on P1×FC4×P3 (P3 already varies source family at fixed hand+baseline). Drop the census as evidential basis for any registered prediction; keep it as illustration only.

  2. BLOCKING — §6 null-closure logic is asymmetric and over-closes. Arm closes resolved on the null if either P1 fails or FC4 fires or P2a/P2b hold. P1 failure is compatible with underpower, genre mismatch, or one noisy cell; P2 hold is compatible with finding 1. That disjunction lets the arm close on a null the data do not support. Remedy: Close on null only if (FC1 passes) AND (FC4 fires OR (P3 shows source-family grading at fixed hand)) AND P1 fails the 3-of-4 sign pattern; if P1 fails and FC4 does not fire and P3 is null, write unresolved — replication failed, mechanism unadjudicated, do not close the arm.

  3. BLOCKING — FC4 (§4) does not catch “still about dialogue.” The Oaxaca split in §3 is algebraically exact for share vs rate but the wrong gate for the scientific question. Share component can be small while the entire effect lives inside speech rates (s_T − s_O), i.e. translations render address denser inside quotes — still a dialogue phenomenon, not a translating-register property. Threshold 80% is arbitrary and one-sided; 50–79% share would still mean “mostly dialogue volume” yet would license P1. Two original arms have speech share 0.008 and 0.059 (§2.3–2.4), so s_O rests on almost no tokens and the speech half of the rate component is unstable even under FC2’s whole-arm fallback. Remedy: (a) Lower gate to ≥50% share in ≥3/4 cells, or (b) add a parallel gate: if the narration-only {you,your} Δ fails to replicate the full-text sign pattern in ≥3/4 independent non-Romance cells, withhold P1 as dialogue-linked regardless of D; (c) under FC7-style floor, declare speech-side rates non-reportable when speech tokens <200 in either arm, and recompute D on the remaining cells only.

  4. BLOCKING — P4 + FC1 cannot license the null P4 asks for (§3, §4, §6). FC1 (speech vs narration, S≥0.5) shows the machinery detects a large within-text register contrast. It does not calibrate power against a profile-level translated-register effect of the size worth closing an arm over (predecessor S was −0.0021). With four cells, max 40 blocks, no power analysis, and no minimum detectable S declared, P4 cannot distinguish “no profile-level register in the new cells” from “not enough data to see one.” Remedy: Pre-declare MDE: e.g. if FC1 passes and the half-width of the P4 permutation null does not exclude |S|≥0.15 (or another fixed floor tied to predecessor positive-control scale), report P4 as inconclusive, not as null replication; forbid §6 from using P4 alone to underwrite arm closure.

  5. BLOCKING — Within-cell genre confound is not defended and can produce P1 without translation. Holding the hand fixed (§1 defence list) does not hold genre fixed. CARL: Wilhelm Meister (novel) vs Sartor Resartus (experimental satire). DUFF: novel vs letters (speech 0.008). HAPG-RU/DOLE-RU: fiction vs travel. Fiction-vs-letters/travel systematically moves dialogue and address terms. P1 can pass from genre baseline mismatch alone; FC4 only partially absorbs this (finding 3). Remedy: Pre-register a genre-matched sensitivity: restrict original-arm blocks to the nearest prose genre available, or add an explicit FC that withholds P1 if the sign pattern is carried only by cells whose original-arm speech share is <0.10 (DUFF) or whose original work is non-narrative prose (CARL Sartor); state residual genre risk in limits and deny arm-closing language that says “property of translating.”

  6. BLOCKING — P1 pooled statistic (§3, §5.4) and the 3-of-4 bar interact with cell size. Thinning to 40 caps the top end but leaves floors unequal (§2.3: one translated arm 23 blocks). Unweighted mean of cell Δs gives equal vote to low-precision cells; a single small noisy cell can flip both the pooled sign/P and the 3-of-4 count. P1 can pass or fail from cell-size geometry alone. Remedy: Pool by precision-weighted mean (inverse within-cell permutation variance, or block-weighted); require 3-of-4 only among cells with ≥N blocks in both arms (declare N, e.g. 10); report weighted and unweighted, with P1 gated on weighted.

  7. NON-BLOCKING — §2.4 predecessor-protection. The argument that the MACH dialogue-share reversal is “two ways of computing the same diagnostic” is half-right about analysis consistency (per-work matches blocking) and wrong about published truth: E-20260805f/RS-20260805f stated translation>original dialogue in all four cells; that sentence is false under the analysis-consistent method. “Changes no statistic” and “not a licence to reopen” are policy, not epistemology. Record the published diagnostic sentence as false in limits; do not reopen results. Argument is mildly protective but does not bias this run’s estimators.

  8. NON-BLOCKING — your sits in both {you,your} and the possessive class. P1 and P2b are not cleanly separable; a pure second-person effect contaminates P2b, and a pure possessive-supply effect contaminates P1. Remedy: Score P2b on {my,his,her,its,our,their} only (exclude your); keep {you,your} for P1/P2a/P3.

  9. NON-BLOCKING — P2a cell set is heterogeneous and tiny. P2a contrasts SMOL+DOLE-ROM vs CARL+DUFF (two vs two, one from corpus 1, FC5 leave-one-out will withhold on any single dissent). French HAPG is Romance but not pro-drop and is excluded from P2a yet used in P3 — coherent for pro-drop but underpowered either way. Already covered if P2a loses arm-closing power (finding 1).

  10. NON-BLOCKING — §5.5 Delta-z computed once outside the permutation loop. Same choice as predecessor; can slightly inflate Type I for profile S. Accept only if FC1 is the sole profile claim with force; do not let P4 close the arm (finding 4).