Translating Without a Judge

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Repository path: workshop/experiments/E-20260803d-class-uniformity/design.md · rendered 2026-09-09

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typeexperiment
idE-20260803d-class-uniformity
statusfrozen
created2026-08-03
updated2026-08-03
sensesconsistency, cultural-mediation, style-correspondence
purposeEvidence for the derivation of the goodness sense `consistency`; no translation is being evaluated for quality and no reader-facing edition is at stake.
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provisionaltrue
linkswiki/arms/ARM-typology-derivation.md, wiki/goodness-senses.md, wiki/findings/sense-dossier.md, workshop/translations/bezhin-lug/R04-v2/translation.md, config/models.md, config/budget.md

E-20260803d — is the drift caused? A class of fourteen items, three translators, one text

Frozen before dispatch. ARM-typology-derivation step 5 (T2).

1. The question, and why it is not the one the project has been asking

wiki/goodness-senses.md defines consistency as: "Internal coherence across the whole text: names, terminology, motifs, register do not drift without cause."

Against it the project holds a census: seven translators, five language pairs, five eras (1857–2026), and not one of them uniform on a forked class — Shaw four ways over Buddhist toponyms, Garnett two ways over two dogs in a sentence, Baudelaire three ways over three italicised foreignisms, four translators four ways over lind-plega. wiki/findings/sense-dossier.md records the standing reading: "the alternative reading — that consistency as written is a prescription the observed norm contradicts — has kept getting more expensive to deny."

The census cannot settle that, because it has never looked at the two words that do the work. Every instance in it measures outcome — that a class came out non-uniform. The definition does not forbid non-uniformity. It forbids non-uniformity without cause. Nobody has asked whether the drift the census records is caused.

This run asks it, on a class large enough to answer with, in a text where three renderings exist.

Sentence test (wiki/tracks.md §subject rule). What does this unit teach about translating literature or evaluating translations? — Whether holding one handling across a class of culture-bound items is a norm translators observe, or a prescription this project wrote into its definition of "good" and the practice contradicts. That is a question about what "good" means in translation, which is the charter's central object; it is not a question about the project's instruments.

2. Materials

source Turgenev, «Бежин луг» (1851), the boys' night talk entire — 143 paragraphs, 3,825 Russian words, SHA-256 9033b289… (workshop/translations/bezhin-lug/R04-v2/source-ru.txt)
T1 Constance Garnett, 1895, A Sportsman's Sketches (Project Gutenberg 8597), the matching section — 4,707 words
T2 Isabel Hapgood, 1903, Memoirs of a Sportsman (archive.org memoirsofsportsm00turg, OCR), the matching section — 5,950 words
T3 the lead, 2026-08-03, T-bezhin-lug-R04-v2, R04, log frozen and committed before this design was written
class 14 items, 43 tokens, fixed from the Russian alone before translating — materials/items.json

All three sources are public domain (1851 / 1895 / 1903).

3. The three declarations that constrain what may be concluded

(a) The published pair is measurably DEPENDENT on this stretch, and this is registered before the run, not discovered after it. tools/dependence_check.py over the matched sections:

shared 7-grams 53
shared 12-grams 5
shared 15-grams 0
longest common run 14 tokens
verdict DEPENDENT?

The name-excluded counts the tool also prints are void on this pair and are not reported: OCR running heads in the Hapgood scan make name_tokens() ban a, the, that, he, which is the instrument artifact RS-20260725c-contamination-sweep recorded on this same scan. The five shared 12-grams reduce to two distinct runs, both in the narrator's voice.

Registered consequence. Convergence between Garnett and Hapgood is inflated by whatever dependence this is. Therefore: divergence between them is evidential and convergence is not. No conclusion in this run may rest on the two published translators agreeing.

(b) The lead is primed on this class and is excluded from any convergence test. Before translating, a string-frequency probe printed counts (not sentences) for domovoy, nymph, sprite, water-, wood-, rusalk, Trishka and eleven others over both comparators, and the dependence gate printed the shared 14-token run verbatim. Both are declared in full in T-bezhin-lug-R04-v2 §Priming. The lead's renderings are used here for one purpose only: as the sites at which its frozen log recorded a reason. Reasons are not made independent or dependent by knowing another translator's lexical choices.

(c) Nothing here is a quality judgment. No rendering is scored better or worse than another. Tier D is NOT PASSED; every evaluative sentence anywhere downstream of this run carries provisional: true and internal-judgment-only.

4. The lead's own coding, frozen here before any seat is dispatched

Strategy vocabulary — the project's own set (wiki/goodness-senses.md, cultural-mediation), plus descriptive paraphrase for the case none of the nine names:

copy-opaque · transparent calque · substitute · gloss · omit · scaffold · measure conversion · re-foreignisation · added realia · descriptive paraphrase

item Garnett 1895 Hapgood 1903 lead 2026
I01 домовой copy-opaque copy-opaque transparent calque
I02 русалка copy-opaque substitute (two different substitutes) copy-opaque
I03 лесная нечисть descriptive paraphrase descriptive paraphrase descriptive paraphrase
I04 Тришка copy-opaque + gloss copy-opaque copy-opaque
I05 леший transparent calque transparent calque transparent calque
I06 погань substitute substitute substitute
I07 водяной transparent calque substitute transparent calque
I08 крестная сила substitute transparent calque transparent calque
I09 нечистое место substitute substitute transparent calque
I10 разрыв-трава descriptive paraphrase substitute + gloss transparent calque
I11 родительская суббота substitute transparent calque + gloss transparent calque
I12 предвиденье небесное transparent calque + gloss transparent calque + gloss transparent calque
I13 лесное зелье descriptive paraphrase substitute descriptive paraphrase
I14 бучило substitute substitute substitute

This coding is one coder's and the project has a measurement of what that is worth — the same arm's RS-20260802-voice-warrant §6 found an independent seat agreeing with the lead's sense-home assignment on 9 of 24. That is why §5 dispatches three seats and why the primary figures are the seats', not these.

5. Procedure

Stage 1 — strategy coding (3 blind seats, one call each)

Each seat receives all 14 items. For each item: the Russian word, a one-line gloss of the thing, the Russian context sentence, and the three renderings labelled A / B / C in an order permuted per item by sha256(item_id) and frozen in materials/order.json — no translator named, no century given, no mention of Garnett, Hapgood, a lead agent, or this project. The seat assigns exactly one strategy from the vocabulary above to each of A, B, C, and may append +gloss where a footnote is described.

The seat is not told what the run is about, that uniformity is at issue, or that any item is expected to differ from any other.

Stage 2 — the cause property (3 blind seats, one call each, no English shown at all)

The registered site-property, chosen before any coding because it is the one the class's dominant strategy turns on:

BLOCKS-CALQUE. Is a transparent English calque unavailable for this item? — i.e. can an English word or short compound built out of the Russian word's own literal sense denote this thing accurately enough that an English reader takes the right sense, without a footnote?

Each seat sees only Russian: the 14 class items plus 8 filler items — five ordinary nouns from the same passage and three culture-bound positive calibrators, each with its expectation justified individually in materials/items.json (amendments A3/A10) — shuffled into one frozen order, each with gloss and context, and answers YES (a calque is unavailable / blocked) or NO (a calque is available) with a one-clause reason. No English rendering of any item is shown. The seats cannot see what any translator did, so this coding cannot be contaminated by the outcome it is used to predict, and it cannot be inflated by the Garnett–Hapgood dependence.

Stage 3 — analysis (local, no API)

analysis/score.py, written and committed before dispatch, computes from the stored raw bodies:

  1. Uniformity. Per translator, the number of distinct strategies over the 14 items, and the modal strategy's share.
  2. Divergence. The number of items on which the two published translators' seat-majority strategies differ.
  3. Cause. Per translator: P(non-modal strategy | BLOCKS-CALQUE majority = YES) minus P(non-modal strategy | NO).
  4. The log check. For the lead only: agreement between the seats' BLOCKS-CALQUE majority and the site-local-reason column frozen in the translator's log before this design existed.

6. Predictions, registered

prediction threshold what it would mean
P1 Neither published translator is uniform ≥ 3 distinct strategies each over 14 items positive control on the census; a failure here would say this class is unlike the seven the census rests on
P2 Drift is caused: calque-availability predicts whether a calque is used — restated by amendment A12; see §10 pooled published gap ≥ 0.40 consistency's "without cause" clause survives — the census measured licensed drift
P3 The two published translators diverge ≥ 3 of 14 items differ dependence-safe direction; a translator-borne component exists
P4 The lead's frozen log agrees with the seats on where cause lies ≥ 10 of 14 items contemporaneous process evidence is recoverable by outside readers from the source alone

P2 is the run's primary. If P2 fails for both published translators, the honest reading is that non-uniformity in this class is not explained by the availability of a calque, and consistency's escape clause is doing no work here.

7. Failure criteria, registered

No threshold in §6 or §7 may be revised after any body is read.

8. The decision this feeds, with its default fixed now

The run's output goes to a decision page on consistency's wording, opened this session and ratifiable only by a later one (charter §8). Options, with the provisional default fixed here, before the numbers:

9. Panel and pre-flight

Seats are non-Anthropic (config/models.md); the critic takes no part in either coding stage.

stage seats max_tokens worst case
pre-run critic P4 moonshotai/kimi-k3 16,000 $0.26
stage 1 strategy P1, P3, P5 4,000 $0.07
stage 2 property P1, P3, P5 3,000 $0.05
second critic pass, if the first returns NEEDS-REDESIGN P4 16,000 $0.26
retry reserve (note (bfc)) — — $0.20
declared worst case $0.84

Worst case is built from max_tokens and the published output price, not from an expected answer length — note (abc). Today's headroom at session open: $3.407322239 of the $5.00 UTC-day cap, three sessions already run. P2 google/gemini-3.6-flash is not seated in either coding stage: it billed ten times P1 or P5 for the same payloads at S096 and returned an unusable body on 4 of 5 calls (notes (bhq), (bhf)).

10. Amendments after freezing

A1 — the critic dispatch, after a seat failure that note (b) had already prescribed the fix for. The first critic dispatch (critic_pass1, P4 moonshotai/kimi-k3, provider Fireworks, max_tokens 16,000, no reasoning cap) returned finish_reason: length, 16,547 reasoning tokens, zero content characters, $0.260301 for nothing, in 223.2 s. Guard (b) in call.py rejected it correctly and the raw body is preserved at runs/critic_pass1_kimi-k3_try1.raw.

This is note (b)'s twenty-fourth firing and the fourth on this same seat, and the note's own standing amendment — "on a seat with a recorded history of this failure, the reasoning cap is not advisory; effort: low is set on the first dispatch, not the retry" — was not applied. S094 applied it to this seat and got a clean verdict; this session inherited call.py from S096, which had no reasoning parameter at all, and did not check. The cost is the operator's, not the seat's.

The amendment, made before any coding seat was dispatched:

  1. call.py._post() and dispatch() take reasoning_effort, posted as {"reasoning": {"effort": …}}.
  2. The critic is re-dispatched under the new tag critic_pass1b — not the old one — so the rejected billed body cannot be overwritten (note (bgz)).
  3. effort: "low" on the first attempt, and a declared reserve, google/gemini-3.6-flash, which S074 established is the remedy that actually works on this seat when a raised cap does not. The reserve takes no part in either coding stage, so the design's independence condition holds.
  4. Declared worst case revised from $0.84 to $1.10, and the $0.260301 already spent on nothing is inside that figure rather than excused from it.

Pass 1 of the pre-run critic then returned NEEDS-AMENDMENT, eight findings, four BLOCKING, and all eight are accepted. Body: runs/critic_pass1b_kimi-k3_try1.txt (P4, provider Fireworks, stop, 76.0 s, $0.05136 — a fifth of the failed dispatch, for a complete verdict). Amendments A2–A7 below were made before any coding seat was dispatched.

A2 — the glosses handed the seats the answer (critic finding 1, BLOCKING, and it was fatal). Stage 2 claims to show no English. It showed something worse: the gloss of each item paraphrased the Russian word's own morphology, so I05 read "the spirit of the forest", I07 "the spirit of the water", I08 quoted the formula itself, and I10 said the plant "bursts locks and opens what is shut". A seat asked whether a transparent calque is available for an item whose gloss is the transparent calque is not judging calque-availability; it is reading the answer off the question. Every gloss is rewritten to describe the referent — what the being is believed to do, where it is met — with no paraphrase of the word's parts. materials/items.json carries the rule and the record of what was changed.

A3 — the sham control was not a control for the failure mode that matters (finding 4). Five trivial nouns test only false-YES. Three culture-bound positive calibrators are added — паперть (the step outside a village church), полати (the boarded sleeping platform above a peasant stove), староста (the peasant head of a village community) — items as culture-bound as the class but with a plainly available English rendering. All eight fillers are expected NO. F2 now fires at two or more filler YES-majorities, not one, so a single seat's slip on a single filler cannot void the primary.

A4 — the strategy list order is shuffled per seat (finding 5). transparent calque was second in a fixed list in every payload. The list is now ordered by sha256(seat + strategy). The residual leak the critic names — that showing one item with three renderings reveals a translation-comparison study — is accepted and not fixed: removing it means padding the payload with renderings from other passages, and the strategy coding is a description of visible English, not a judgment.

A5 — a cell may hold two strategies (finding 3, BLOCKING). One rendering in the set uses two different handlings at different tokens of the same item. Forcing one label would have made that cell wrong by construction and would have hidden the within-item drift, which is the very thing under study. Seats may answer X / Y; score.py represents every cell as a set, counts both members toward a translator's distinct-strategy total, and counts an item as divergent in P3 when the two sets differ. Split cells are reported separately as split_items.

A6 — a minimum for each conditioning cell (finding 2, BLOCKING). P2 divides by cells that could be empty. New failure criterion F5: fewer than 4 YES-majority class items or fewer than 4 NO-majority class items → P2 and P4 return NO VERDICT. With 14 items, a gap computed off one or two YES items is one miskey wide, and the design said nothing about it.

A7 — P2 is restated as a pooled estimate with the dependence caveat attached (finding 6). The original threshold — "gap ≥ 0.40 for both published translators" — is a convergence claim, and §3(a) forbids resting anything on these two converging. P2 is now decided on the pooled published estimate (28 translator×item cells), with both individual gaps reported beside it and the interpretive sentence stating that this is one dependent pair, not two observations. The divergent items (P3) are the evidential core, as the critic asked.

A8 — the fixed order is called fixed, and its balance is checked (finding 8). The A/B/C assignment is fixed by sha256(item_id), not randomised. Checked: no permutation takes more than 4 of 14 items, and no translator occupies one slot more than 7 of 14 times (garnett in slot B). Recorded in materials/order.json.

11. The result → option map, registered (critic finding 7, BLOCKING for the decision)

A frozen default with no frozen decision rule lets the choice among B–E be made after the numbers. This table is registered before dispatch. Combinations not listed return "no recommendation", and the decision page then records that rather than improvising one.

F1 / F2 / F5 P2 (pooled) P1 option the decision page opens with as its lead
any fired — — no recommendation on the clause; the page reports the instrument failure and the descriptive P1/P3 figures only
clear MET met A — no change. Drift is caused; the census measured licensed drift
clear MET not met A, with the note that this class is unlike the census's seven
clear NOT MET met B — amend, and the entry states the measured base rate of within-class non-uniformity. C and E are recorded on the page as the live alternatives with what each would need
clear NOT MET not met no recommendation; the class did not behave like the census's and the property did not predict

D (retire) is not reachable from this run and the page will say so: one class in one text cannot retire a sense, and consistency holds the strongest cross-corpus census on the list.

Registered, on critic pass 2 finding 6: P3 and P4 are reported as context and do NOT gate the option. If P4 fails while P2 passes, option A carries the caveat that the cause locus is not independently recoverable from the source by outside readers. If P3 fails while P2 passes, the causal reading rests on one pooled dependent pair, and the page states that 28 cells are not 28 observations.

12. Second critic pass, and the amendments it forced

Pass 2 on the amended design returned NEEDS-AMENDMENT, nine findings, three BLOCKING, all nine accepted (runs/critic_pass2_kimi-k3_try1.txt, P4, stop, 106.0 s, $0.11721).

A12 — the primary was wrong-signed by construction (finding 1, BLOCKING, and this is the one that mattered). P2 measured departure from the translator's modal strategy conditioned on BLOCKS-CALQUE. That only detects cause when the modal strategy is the calque. On the frozen §4 coding Garnett's modal is substitute, not calque — so for Garnett, blocked items are exactly where the modal substitute is used, the gap goes to zero or negative, and the run would have reported "not caused" for the translator the census is actually about. P2 is restated as the direct, modality-free question: does calque-availability predict whether a calque is used?

P2a (primary): P(calque | calque available) − P(calque | calque blocked), pooled over the two published translators, threshold ≥ 0.40.

The old modal-departure measure is retained and reported as P2b, context only. score.py computes both and records P2_decided_on: P2a.

A9 — the slash convention collided with the translators' own punctuation (finding 2, BLOCKING). a deep pit / pool and water-nymph / water-sprite look identical in the payload and are different things. Genuine two-occurrence splits are now marked with ‖ (U+2016), the convention is stated in the stage-1 prompt, and the parser splits on it. The lead's I14 is corrected to a single rendering: its head noun does not change.

A10 — полати was a mis-registered calibrator (finding 3, BLOCKING). It was added as a culture-bound item with a "plainly available" English rendering; it has no uncontested English compound, so two seats answering YES — defensibly — could have voided the primary on a wrong expectation rather than on an instrument failure. Withdrawn and replaced by приказчик. Every filler's expectation is now justified individually in materials/items.json, not asserted as a batch.

A11 — all ten strategy labels are defined in the payload (finding 4), and two glosses lose their markedness cues (finding 7). Five labels were listed and never defined, which would have compressed the coding onto the five that were. And A2's claim to have removed the gloss leak is corrected here to "reduced, not removed": the referent glosses still carry the calque's spatial half (among trees, beneath a river, a particular building), which a seat that can read the Russian word can join up. What is removed is the markedness cue — I12 no longer says the word is non-standard and footnoted, I04 no longer says the name is a diminutive — because both invited YES on grounds other than calque-availability.

A13 — P4's rubric is frozen, and P4 is demoted (finding 8). P4 compares the seats' BLOCKS-CALQUE majority against the site-local-reason column exactly as frozen in the translator's log, machine-read from LOG_REASON in score.py, with no re-reading of the log's prose and no discretion after the bodies are opened. The two are not the same construct — the log asks was there a site-local reason, the seats are asked is a calque blocked — so P4 is a convergence check between two related questions, not a validation, and per §11 it does not gate the option.

Accepted risk, recorded rather than fixed (finding 9). Fourteen of the twenty-two stage-2 items are folk-belief vocabulary and eight are mundane, so a seat can see which class is under study. This leaks the class, not the direction of the hypothesis. No interpretive sentence may claim the seats were naive to the class's specialness.

No third pass. Two passes is this project's practice, and pass 2's own closing judgment is that the three blocking findings are fixable without unfreezing anything that matters. They were fixed before any coding seat was dispatched.