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typemanifest
idcensus-cuzhi-frozen
statusfrozen
created2026-07-31
updated2026-07-31
sensesstyle-correspondence, cultural-mediation
internal-judgment-onlytrue
linksworkshop/experiments/E-20260731b-figure-audit/design/design.md, workshop/experiments/E-20260731b-figure-audit/materials/cuzhi-zh.txt

Site census — 蒲松齡〈促織〉, frozen before translation

Frozen at this commit, before a word of the translation was written. Forty sites in the source, each with the label the lead's own reading says the site calls for, under the five-option vocabulary of E-20260728f verbatim:

style-correspondence — a marked formal feature of the source's expression cultural-mediation — a thing in the source's social world (realia, allusion, measure words, names, terms of address, titles and ranks) both — the marked element belongs under both senses as a whole and cannot be split composite — the marked element separates into more than one part, and the parts belong under different senses neither

These declarations are internal-judgment-only and are NOT the measure. The control asks whether composite fires at all, not whether raters agree with the lead. The census exists so that the item set is demonstrably built to contain composite candidates rather than asserted to be — and so that the site list is blind to the rendering, which does not yet exist.

Distribution declared in advance: 12 composite, 13 cultural-mediation, 10 style-correspondence, 2 both, 3 neither. Composite candidates are 30% of the set, which is high by construction and is the point; the other 70% is not filler in the decorative sense but the part of the set that makes a composite count interpretable.

# source declared why (one line, lead's reading)
01 1 宣德間 cultural-mediation a reign period, dated by an emperor's era name
02 1 華陰令 cultural-mediation a named county and the office of its magistrate
03 1 欲媚上官 cultural-mediation 上官 = the officials above him in the bureaucratic ladder
04 1 令以責之里正 cultural-mediation 里正 — the sub-county headman on whom levies land
05 2 市中游俠兒 cultural-mediation a social type: the town's idle sporting bravos
06 2 里胥猾黠,假此科斂丁口 cultural-mediation 里胥 clerk · 科斂 statutory levy · 丁口 the taxable adult-male head-count
07 3 操童子業,久不售 composite 童子業 = candidacy in the examination system (a thing in the social world); 售 "to sell" used of passing it is a marked dead metaphor the classical prose keeps alive — two separable decisions
08 3 靡計不施,迄無濟 style-correspondence double negative across a four-character parallel
09 3 不中于款 cultural-mediation 款 = the specification a levied cricket must meet
10 3 宰嚴限追比 composite 追比 is a named procedure — flogging at fixed intervals until arrears are made good (social world); the four-character officialese compression is a formal feature of how it is said
11 3 見紅女白婆,填塞門戶 cultural-mediation 紅女白婆 — young women and white-haired crones, a set phrase for a shrine crowd
12 3 駝背巫,能以神卜 cultural-mediation the hunchbacked medium and her divination practice
13 3 唇吻翕辟 style-correspondence four-character sound-figure for lips opening and closing
14 3 無毫髮爽 style-correspondence 毫髮 hyperbole in a fixed four-character shape
15 3 中繪殿閣類蘭若 cultural-mediation 蘭若 — Sanskrit araṇya naturalised as the word for a Buddhist temple
16 3 針針叢棘 style-correspondence reduplication doing the work of a picture
17 3 見蹲石鱗鱗 style-correspondence 鱗鱗 reduplication, scale-like
18 3 巨身修尾,青項金翅 cultural-mediation the cricket-fancier's descriptive vocabulary, a technical register with its own literature
19 3 雖連城拱璧不啻也 composite 連城拱璧 alludes to the jade of He worth fifteen cities (allusion); 不啻 is a marked classical comparative — the referent and the construction are separately renderable
20 3 蟹白栗黃 cultural-mediation crab-white and chestnut-yellow: what a fancier feeds a cricket
21 3 以塞官責 cultural-mediation 官責 — the demand made by the office, a thing with a legal shape
22 4 業根,死期至矣 composite 業根 is Buddhist karma-root used as a curse (social world) and simultaneously the mother's spoken register breaking into the classical narration (formal feature) — separable, and translators split them
23 4 翁歸,自與汝復算耳 both 翁 is a kinship term of address and the register of the threat, in one word that cannot be split
24 4 面色灰死 style-correspondence four-character compound; "ash-dead" is a figure, not a fact
25 4 夫妻向隅,茅舍無煙 style-correspondence parallel clauses; 向隅 is a posture-figure for despair
26 4 兒涕而出 neither plain narrative action
27 5 取兒藁葬 cultural-mediation 藁葬 — burial in straw, without rites: a specific social fact
28 5 東曦既駕 composite 東曦 is the sun-charioteer of the east (allusion); the four-character time-marker in high diction is a formal feature of the sentence
29 5 氣斷聲吞 style-correspondence four-character parallel for grief
30 5 形若土狗,梅花翅,方首長脛 composite 土狗 and 梅花翅 are fancier's terms of art (social world) inside a list whose asyndetic four-then-three rhythm is a formal feature
31 5 將獻公堂 cultural-mediation 公堂 — the magistrate's hall as an institution
32 6 自名「蟹殼青」 cultural-mediation a champion cricket's ring-name
33 6 掩口胡盧而笑 style-correspondence 胡盧 is a sound-binome for a stifled laugh
34 6 蠢若木雞 composite 木雞 alludes to Zhuangzi's wooden gamecock (allusion); the 若-simile is the construction carrying it
35 8 獻諸撫軍 cultural-mediation 撫軍 — the provincial Grand Coordinator
36 8 詔賜撫臣名馬衣緞 composite 撫臣 renames the same man from the throne's side (a fact about the social world); 詔賜 is edict-formula diction
37 8 宰以「卓異」聞 composite 卓異 is a graded merit rating in the evaluation of officials (social world); 聞 is the classical causative "was made known [to the throne]" — a grammatical decision separate from the term
38 8 又囑學使,俾入邑庠 composite 學使 and 邑庠 are the examination commissioner and the county school (social world); 俾 is a marked literary causative
39 9 異史氏曰 composite the persona alludes to 太史公曰, Sima Qian's tag (allusion); the tag itself is a genre formula whose shape must be reproduced or lost
40 9 遂使撫臣、令尹、并受促織恩蔭 composite 恩蔭 is the hereditary privilege conferred by imperial favour (social world); applying it to a cricket is the sentence's central irony, a formal move
41 9 一人飛升,仙及雞犬 both a proverb whose referent and whose parallel shape arrive together and resist separation
42 3 早出暮歸 neither ordinary temporal adverbial
43 7 一雞瞥來,徑進一啄 neither plain narrative action

Count check: 43 rows. The declared distribution above says 40 and is wrong; the table is the census and the count is 43 — 12 composite, 15 cultural-mediation, 11 style-correspondence, 2 both, 3 neither. Left visible rather than silently corrected, because the frozen artifact is the table and not the summary sentence above it.