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E-20260729h — restate every published-pair rank twice, and ask what the numerator is

ARM-baseline-restate step 1, its only declared step. Design frozen at this commit, before any comparator English was fetched into the container and before a word of the translation limb was written. S060, 2026-07-29.

1. Question

Two questions, wired.

Q1 — the arm's owed repair. Where the project has ranked a lead translation against a distribution of published-pair agreement, does the rank survive removing the pairs now known to be dependent? (ARM-baseline-restate, constituted S040 as the review-or-retire discharge of a backlog item opened S030.)

Q2 — what preparing the repair exposed. The rank places one lead observation inside a distribution whose measured spread is 17.8×. Is the lead's overlap rate a stable property of the lead, or one draw from a spread as wide as the one it is being ranked in — and does it track the published pair's rate unit by unit?

The wire, in one sentence. The study limb restates a rank whose denominator is a measured distribution; the translation limb tests whether its numerator is a point or a distribution, by translating — for the first time in this project — prose poems of the same book on which the two published translators are independent, which is the one stratum every lead translation the project holds has missed.

2. What the stored data already shows, before this experiment runs

Five facts, all recomputed from reference.json and results.json at design time. They are not predictions and are not scored; they are what makes Q2 worth asking, and three of them are defects in the figures the arm exists to repair.

  1. The split is 13 flagged / 28 clean / 1 unchecked of 42 — not "13 flagged / 29 clean of 42" as wiki/arms/ARM-baseline-restate.md states, and not "13 / 41" as RS-20260726b-baseline-dependence states without saying which unit is missing.
  2. One unit was silently dropped by the dependence check. tools/dependence_check.py's run() skips any unit whose text is falsy (if a in texts and b in texts and texts[a] and texts[b]), and E-20260726b's build.py re-fetched and re-segmented the Gutenberg volumes rather than using stored bodies. Index 1, Garnett's A CONVERSATION, is absent from the 41 checked units, and nothing anywhere records that it is absent.
  3. The dropped unit is the reference distribution's minimum. Its frozen n=5 rate is 8.798, the smallest of the 42, and RS-20260726-period-control §2 names it as the least-agreeing passage. So the published max/min = 17.8× divides by an observation whose dependence status has never been checked.
  4. The maximum is a flagged unit. THE MONK (index 39), rate 156.463, carries 4 shared 12-grams and a 14-token run. The published 17.8× is therefore max(flagged) / min(unchecked).
  5. «Роза» — the unit the lead's rank was measured on — is itself flagged (index 15, n12 = 6, n15 = 3, longest run 17). And all nine lead prose-poem translations this project holds are on flagged units: the eight of T-senilia-R04-v1 (indices 3, 4, 11, 17, 20, 27, 33, 39, selected by E-20260726c because they carried shared runs) and «Роза». Zero are on clean units. The project has never measured its own overlap on a unit of this book where the two Victorians are independent of each other.

Fact 5 is the reason this session has a translation limb rather than being an afternoon of arithmetic.

3. Materials

Stored, unmodified.

Source for the translation limb. Six complete prose poems, runs/sources-ru.md, 898 Russian words, committed in this same commit. Two witnesses — ru.wikisource.org and rvb.ru (PSS, Наука 1982, т. 10) — collated word-for-word: identical on all six, no emendation needed (F1 met and recorded).

# idx Russian Garnett title Hapgood title ru words published n=5 frozen n12
1 24 Корреспондент THE REPORTER THE CORRESPONDENT 108 12.903 0
2 21 Щи CABBAGE SOUP CABBAGE-SOUP 207 23.891 0
3 14 Черепа THE SKULLS THE SKULLS 148 31.414 0
4 41 Молитва PRAYER PRAYER 130 46.980 0
5 13 Воробей THE SPARROW THE SPARROW 199 56.604 0
6 34 Завтра, завтра TO-MORROW! TO-MORROW! TO-MORROW! TO-MORROW! 106 103.704 0

The Garnett↔Russian mapping was established from titles only — Hapgood's title is a second independent English witness to it in all six rows — and no poem body in any English was fetched, opened or printed before the translations are committed.

Comparators, deliberately not yet present. Project Gutenberg 8935 (Constance Garnett, Dream Tales and Prose Poems, 1897) and 15994 (Isabel F. Hapgood, A Reckless Character and Other Stories, 1904). Both public domain. Fetched only at step 4 below, after the six translations and their logs are committed.

4. The selection rule, frozen and mechanical

Applied to the 42 rows of reference.json['lcs/frozen']['rows'], in this order:

  1. Exclude the 9 units the lead has already translated — indices 3, 4, 11, 15, 17, 20, 27, 33, 39.
  2. Exclude flagged units (n12 > 0). The target stratum is the one the project has never had.
  3. Exclude index 0 (THE COUNTRY). Its 9-token Garnett~Hapgood run was printed into this session's own context while the split was being tabulated. Recorded rather than ignored.
  4. Exclude index 1 (A CONVERSATION). Its dependence status is unchecked at design time and it is a subject of the study limb; it may not also be a subject of the translation limb.
  5. Length filter: min(tokens) ≤ 450, so six units fit one session honestly.
  6. Sort the survivors ascending by n=5 frozen rate; take the units at positions round(k·(N−1)/5) for k = 0…5.

N = 21 after step 5. The six selected span 12.903 → 103.704, against a clean-stratum range of 8.902 → 103.704: the rule reaches the top of the clean stratum and stops one unit short of its bottom, because that unit is index 0.

Exposure register, kept because step 3 only works if it is complete. The only Garnett or Hapgood word-sequences printed into this session before the translations are committed are: the 9-token run of index 0, and the 18-token run of index 4, quoted in RS-20260726b-baseline-dependence §Where the runs sit. Both indices are excluded. No sequence from any of the six selected units, or from any of the 42 units' bodies, has been printed.

5. Statistic — inherited, not chosen here

Frozen at E-20260725c-contamination-sweep §4 and used unchanged by S026–S028:

shared n-gram types per 1000 tokens of the shorter text.

n = 4, 5, 6, 7; primary n = 5. Two parameter-free extremes, both reported: frozen (the aggressive proper-name rule of tools/ngram_overlap.name_tokens) and none (no exclusion). Tokenisation is tools/ngram_overlap.tokenise, unmodified.

Inherited reading rule (RS-20260726-period-control §7): a prediction true at one extreme and false at the other is FAILED, not mixed.

Rank = how many of the reference observations a rate strictly exceeds, computed by the construction E-20260726-period-control/percentile.py already uses, tolerance 1e-6, reported as k/42 (or k/N_clean) and never as a percentage, so self-membership stays visible.

6. Procedure

  1. This design, the six Russian sources and the source manifest committed. No English present.
  2. Independent pre-run critic pass (§9). Amendments recorded in §A of this file before any translation is written and before any comparator is fetched.
  3. Translate the six from the Russian alone, regime R04-lead-close: draft, frozen and committed as its own R06-v1 artifact (R04 §2a), then self-revision committed as R04-v1, each with a translator's log frozen at translation time.
  4. Fetch PG 8935 and 15994. Extract all 42 units with the unmodified S027 extractor. Reproduction gate F3.
  5. Compute rates and ranks at n = 4…7, both variants, for: the six new units, the eight T-senilia-R04-v1 units, and «Роза» re-derived.
  6. Check index 1's dependence with tools/dependence_check.py, unmodified. Finalise the clean subset. Recompute every published rank over it.
  7. Amend the three result pages — both figures side by side, erratum block naming what changed, nothing discarded (ARM-baseline-restate §Constraints: amend, do not rewrite).
  8. Independent verifier recomputing every reported number from the stored bodies, plus a mutation test.

7. Predictions — registered before any comparator English exists

This table is post-critic and is the scored one. The pre-critic table had nine predictions, of which the critic established that two could not fail and one was confounded with the selection rule; §A records what each became. Eight are scored; two demoted items are sanity checks in §8. The count went down, not up.

prediction scored on
P1 Across the 15 lead units, the lead~Garnett n=5 rate varies by ≥ 3.0× max/min, under both variants is the numerator a point?
P2′ The median ratio (lead~Garnett rate ÷ published Garnett~Hapgood rate) at n=5 is LOWER on the 9 flagged units than on the 6 clean units, under both variants the dependence reading, tested on a quantity the selection rule does not fix (A3)
P3 The lead~Garnett rank on the 6 clean units, against the all-units distribution, has median < 41/42 — «Роза»'s figure is not reproduced on clean material is 41/42 typical?
P4′ Spearman ρ between lead~Garnett rate and published Garnett~Hapgood rate across the 15 lead units is ≥ 0.5 and p < 0.05 by permutation (100,000 permutations, seed 20260729), under both variants does overlap track the material? (A4)
P6′ On the clean subset, «Роза»'s lead~Garnett n=5 rate exceeds every clean observation (k = N_clean), under both variants can fail; the fraction version could not (A1)
P7 Median published n=5 frozen rate of the 13 flagged units exceeds that of the 28 clean units if so the clean subset is not a random subsample and the prescribed repair cannot be neutral
P8′ Lead self-estimate (note (jj), 1 of 3 to date): on ≥ 4 of 6 clean units the lead's rank is still ≥ 30/42 the lead's own guess, scored — causal clause struck (A6)
P9 Index 1 (A CONVERSATION) is clean (n12 = 0) the unchecked minimum

Control C1, added by the critic (A3), reported descriptively. Within the overlapping published-rate band — the interval covered by both strata's lead-translated units — compare the median lead~Garnett n=5 rate on flagged against clean units. The band and both n are computed and printed. With single-digit n on at least one side this is descriptive and is not a result, in either direction; it exists so that a difference between strata cannot be read as a dependence effect without the matched-band figure beside it.

8. Failure criteria

Sanity checks — registered, not scored (demoted from the prediction table by the critic, A2):

9. Critic pass

One independent non-Anthropic panel model, role per config/models.md. No model is a subject in this design — every measurement is arithmetic over texts plus the lead's own translation — so the role-collision constraint that has governed S053–S059 does not bind, and the critic is chosen for depth of structural criticism instead. Verdict, findings and the disposition of each finding recorded in critic.md; amendments recorded in §A below before step 3.

10. What this cannot license, stated in advance

A. Amendments after the critic pass

moonshotai/kimi-k3 (P4), NEEDS-AMENDMENT, six findings — three BLOCKING, three MANDATORY, all six accepted, five by changing the design and one on the first of its two offered fixes. Full record and disposition: critic.md. Written before step 3; no translation existed and no comparator English was present in the container when this section was written.