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Perturbation log — E-20260726d-tierD-heldout

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A site is one lexical or structural decision. Sites are numbered in textual order; the light dose is sites {2, 5, 7}, pre-registered in the frozen design before any edit existed (§5). Newlines inside an edit are escaped as \n.

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O4 sites (targeted arms)

Failure types, from the project's own catalogue of accuracy failure in published translations (§4): WR wrong referent · WS wrong word sense · ID invented detail · DN dropped negation. The composition constraint is at least two of each per 8-site set, which with 8 sites and 4 types forces exactly two of each.

item site type in light dose before after Russian basis
T8-GA 1 WR no about the middle of September about the end of October «около половины сентября» — the middle of September
T8-GA 2 DN yes the weather was unsettled the weather was settled «была непостоянная погода» — non-constant weather; morphological negation не-
T8-GA 3 WS no and then behind the parting clouds could be seen and then because of the parting clouds could be seen «из-за раздвинутых туч» — из-за is spatial here (from behind), not causal
T8-GA 4 ID no I sat looking about and listening. I sat looking about and listening, with my gun across my knees. «Я сидел и глядел кругом, и слушал.» — no gun in the source sentence
T8-GA 5 WS yes the prolonged gossip of the summer the prolonged dialect of the summer «не долгий говор лета» — говор is talk/murmur here, not dialect
T8-GA 6 WR no A slight breeze was faintly humming in the tree-tops. A slight breeze was faintly humming in the undergrowth. «Слабый ветер чуть-чуть тянул по верхушкам» — по верхушкам, along the tops
T8-GA 7 ID yes the tiny leaves lying on the earth were on a sudden flecked the tiny leaves lying on the earth, still beaded from the morning's rain, were on a sudden flecked «лежавшие на земле мелкие листья вдруг пестрели» — no such clause in the source
T8-GA 8 DN no white as fresh-fallen snow, before the cold rays of the winter sun have caressed it white as fresh-fallen snow, after the cold rays of the winter sun have caressed it «до которого еще не коснулся холодно играющий луч зимнего солнца» — has NOT yet touched it
T8-HB 1 ID no only just washed clean by the glittering rain only just washed clean by the glittering rain that had passed an hour before «только что смытых сверкающим дождем» — no interval is stated in the source
T8-HB 2 WR yes the jeering little voice of the tom-tit the jeering little voice of the magpie «насмешливый голосок синицы» — синица is the tomtit
T8-HB 3 WR no I and my dog had traversed a grove of lofty aspens I and my horse had traversed a grove of lofty aspens «я с своей собакой прошел через высокую осиновую рощу» — with his dog
T8-HB 4 DN no its round, dirty leaves its round, neat leaves «её круглых неопрятных листьев» — untidy; morphological negation не-
T8-HB 5 WS yes It is a fine tree only on some summer evenings It is a fine tree only on other summer evenings «в иные летние вечера» — иные is 'certain/some' here, not 'other'
T8-HB 6 ID no in the line of the glowing rays of the setting sun in the line of the glowing rays of the setting sun, which reach it before they reach anything else «приходится в упор рдеющим лучам заходящего солнца» — no such clause in the source
T8-HB 7 DN yes and therefore, without halting to rest in that grove, I wended my way and therefore, after halting to rest in that grove, I wended my way «не остановясь в осиновой роще для отдыха» — WITHOUT stopping to rest
T8-HB 8 WS no which is known to sportsmen alone which is known to one sportsman alone «который знаком одним охотникам» — одним here is the dative 'alone/only', not 'one'
T8-K 1 ID no had got itself lost in the far Yakut taiga. had got itself lost in the far Yakut taiga, a fortnight's journey from the nearest town. «затерялась в далёкой якутской тайге» — no distance is stated in the source
T8-K 2 WR yes a belfry shot up into the sky a watch-tower shot up into the sky «выстрелила к небу колокольня» — колокольня is a belfry, and it is the marker of the Russian church
T8-K 3 DN no they were themselves going wild without noticing it they were themselves going wild, and they noticed it «сами они незаметно дичали» — imperceptibly; morphological negation не-
T8-K 4 WR no Marrying Yakut women, they took over the Yakut language and Yakut ways. Marrying Tungus women, they took over the Yakut language and Yakut ways. «Женясь на якутках» — Yakut women
T8-K 5 DN yes he himself differed from the Yakuts neither in his habits nor in his way of life he himself differed from the Yakuts both in his habits and in his way of life «сам не отличался от якутов ни привычками, ни образом жизни» — did NOT differ
T8-K 6 WS no on feast days and other extraordinary occasions on feast days and other emergencies «в других экстренных случаях» — экстренный is 'special/exceptional' here, not 'emergency'
T8-K 7 ID yes He rode oxen with great skill He rode oxen with great skill, having been put on one before he could walk «Он ездил очень искусно верхом на быках» — no such clause in the source
T8-K 8 WS no He worked frightfully hard, lived poorly He worked in fear, lived poorly «Работал он страшно, жил бедно» — страшно is the intensifier 'terribly', not 'in fear'
T3-GA 2 DN yes the weather was unsettled the weather was settled «была непостоянная погода» — non-constant weather; morphological negation не-
T3-GA 5 WS yes the prolonged gossip of the summer the prolonged dialect of the summer «не долгий говор лета» — говор is talk/murmur here, not dialect
T3-GA 7 ID yes the tiny leaves lying on the earth were on a sudden flecked the tiny leaves lying on the earth, still beaded from the morning's rain, were on a sudden flecked «лежавшие на земле мелкие листья вдруг пестрели» — no such clause in the source
T3-HB 2 WR yes the jeering little voice of the tom-tit the jeering little voice of the magpie «насмешливый голосок синицы» — синица is the tomtit
T3-HB 5 WS yes It is a fine tree only on some summer evenings It is a fine tree only on other summer evenings «в иные летние вечера» — иные is 'certain/some' here, not 'other'
T3-HB 7 DN yes and therefore, without halting to rest in that grove, I wended my way and therefore, after halting to rest in that grove, I wended my way «не остановясь в осиновой роще для отдыха» — WITHOUT stopping to rest
T3-K 2 WR yes a belfry shot up into the sky a watch-tower shot up into the sky «выстрелила к небу колокольня» — колокольня is a belfry, and it is the marker of the Russian church
T3-K 5 DN yes he himself differed from the Yakuts neither in his habits nor in his way of life he himself differed from the Yakuts both in his habits and in his way of life «сам не отличался от якутов ни привычками, ни образом жизни» — did NOT differ
T3-K 7 ID yes He rode oxen with great skill He rode oxen with great skill, having been put on one before he could walk «Он ездил очень искусно верхом на быках» — no such clause in the source

Sham sites

Free variation only; word-, sentence- and paragraph-count neutral; no archaising; no sense shift (§6.5). Neutrality is measured by build.py, not asserted.

item site before after
S-GA 1 From early morning a fine rain had been falling Since early morning a fine rain had been falling
S-GA 2 at another it suddenly cleared in parts for an instant at another it cleared suddenly in parts for an instant
S-GA 3 I sat looking about and listening. I sat looking round and listening.
S-GA 4 The leaves faintly rustled over my head The leaves rustled faintly over my head
S-GA 5 the copse in its inmost recesses the copse in its innermost recesses
S-GA 6 as though suddenly everything were smiling in it as though suddenly everything in it were smiling
S-GA 7 the tiny leaves lying on the earth were on a sudden flecked the tiny leaves lying on the earth were of a sudden flecked
S-GA 8 the glaring tints died away instantaneously the glaring tints instantaneously died away
S-K 1 had got itself lost in the far Yakut taiga had got itself lost in the distant Yakut taiga
S-K 2 the sullen thicket still stood all round them the sullen thicket still stood all around them
S-K 3 Fences ran out across the cleared ground Fences ran out over the cleared ground
S-K 4 little smoky yurts spread and multiplied little smoky yurts multiplied and spread
S-K 5 they were themselves going wild without noticing it they themselves were going wild without noticing it
S-K 6 and now and then abused the others as heathen Yakuts and now and again abused the others as heathen Yakuts
S-K 7 who would hurl himself at him in a frenzy who would fling himself at him in a frenzy
S-K 8 the sickness that had settled in Makar the sickness which had settled in Makar

Held-out items

No edits. H-HA and H-HB present Garnett 1897 and Hapgood 1904 unmodified, beside the Russian half they translate.